|Reviews for Breathing Underwater|
| The Imagination Addict chapter 6 . 5/22/2011
bleargh. sorry but i won't continue reading this. u should put a warning that it's a homosexual romance, so people who don't want to read slash won't get a nasty shock. sorry.
| The Imagination Addict chapter 4 . 5/22/2011
very interesting characterization of ur male protagonist. he seems pretty realistic. if ur interested in reading some fantastic guy's point of view romance, check out armith greenleaf's Everybody Wants Ryan. (another good one by her is To Save a Rebel, but she unfortunately removed it)
| PenAndSwords chapter 1 . 7/29/2009
Well, took me long enough to find this!
I remember reading this over at Quizilla!
I was so sad when you discontinued the sequel...
You better still have that somewhere .
I adored it...
| plushdeath chapter 14 . 7/11/2009
| plushdeath chapter 9 . 4/1/2009
I've had to have read this story a total of 11 times by now. I remember when I first read it ...i think last summer. I loved it so much. It was amazing. Thank you!
| born backwards chapter 24 . 4/1/2009
That was such a cute ending. Well, at least Aidan texted him back. I can stop reading on a happy note. I'm happy for Devon and his family...like, that courage is definitey useful. I loved this story, aha, very much.
| born backwards chapter 23 . 4/1/2009
He better come back or I might just cry.
So what is he like bi or something? Lol, wow...i feel stupid asking that question, but uh..i'm confused.
| born backwards chapter 22 . 3/31/2009
Dear goodness, that sounds like a quote. I should just quote you on that on my myspace or something and be all like, this amazing writer once wrote, "it is only when she's breaking me heart that I love her." Only, I would have to put he, lol. Nah, I'm kidding, but seriously, I just love those words. They are like so endearing and so heartbreaking...but so real. And that's what I love about your style of writing. It is real and the readers can relate to the characters and feel their pain and their happiness. I love it.
| born backwards chapter 21 . 3/31/2009
I knew Aidan was going to leave, but it still totally sucks. He was like one of my favorite characters in this story and like..I miss him already and he hasn't even been gone that long. But I'm so happy for Devon. I'm actually smiling right now, however cliche that sounds, because he is finally not going to be angry. I've kind of been wondering when that moment would come around..so in his own, odd, sad, horrific, devastating way...Aidan did Devon a favor. I kind of get it now, aha.
| born backwards chapter 20 . 3/31/2009
That was by far the most depressing thing I have ever read. I mean, I have so many things to say about it, but I don't know where to begin. So, Aidan like told Maddie and all she could ask is if Devon could love her the way he loves Aidan? Helloo, the answer to that is obviously a big fat no. Of course, they all three know that, he thought that himself... I guess...i don't know, this whole relationship thing confuses the hell out of me. I'm just so itching to read more, but I don't think my heart can take it. I normally stop reading books when they get this sad, because I'm too emotional for my own good, rofl...that just comes with being a girl, I guess. It is just so heartbreaking and so terrifying to see a relationship as good as their's end like that, it makes me wonder if there is really even someone out there for everyone...like they always say. Your story is really making me think...well, at least this chapter is, anyway. Like, does love really exist? And if it does, why does it involve so much pain? I'm eighteen and still can't answer that question for myself. Talk about lame, lol. I need to read more...I need to finish this because I don't think I can sleep until I know what happens.
| born backwards chapter 19 . 3/31/2009
Oh, c'mon seriously, you make it impossible to hate Devon. As much as I want to dislike him for cheating on Aidan, I can't help but love him for being so strong and sticking up for himself. I swear, this story is making me confused with myself. I'm just all like...can you hate someone who is completely relatable? I mean, my life is nothing like his, but in a way, I know what it is like to not stick up for yourself and to not tell people how you feel. I can't hate his character because his character has the courage I wish I would have had so long ago. You make him realistic and I love that about his character...I'm sure publishers would, too.
| born backwards chapter 18 . 3/31/2009
Ugh, he so just cheated on Aidan.
That makes me hate Devon right now, like for serious.
| born backwards chapter 17 . 3/31/2009
Their love is so, so sweet.
I don't think there are any better words to describe it. The ones you used at the ending are perfect for it.
That is just simply terrible about Kadence, though.
| born backwards chapter 16 . 3/31/2009
Oh my dear goodness.
I really am speechless now, but I don't think I'll be able to shut up. I really wasn't expecting that. I mean.. his brother... really! That is so sick and twisted and wrong and wow... I still think Aidan and Devon are like the cutest, but just wow.. I should probably refrain from reading chapter seventeen until I calm a little bit. Just wow.. That really is all I can say. Still, this really is brilliant..just absolutely brilliant.
| born backwards chapter 15 . 3/31/2009
I don't know what to say to this story anymore. That is why my reviews have been so short. The story just keeps leaving me speechless. I love the description of the dream. I feel so bad for Delilah, Maddie, Devon, and Aidan. I just want them all to happy and I don't think I will be until they are.. this story is just so... brilliant. That is like the only word I can think of.