|Reviews for Breathing Underwater|
| darkreaperlurking chapter 21 . 6/24/2008
That was a awesome chapter.
| Musickk Darling chapter 21 . 6/24/2008
How could you do that to me? To everyone? i swear there are tears in my eyes...Aidan leaving. Beautiful, yet painful, chapter.
I absolutely love this story. Just letting you know.
| Frozen.by.Sloth chapter 21 . 6/24/2008
I just realized you have an account here, and thought a review could only help. Though I should honestly stop doing that. To be honest, I came on quizilla almost only 'cause of you, it's a nightmare.
Anyways.. As always, brilliant.
I'm gonna wait for more before saying anything else.
It's strange.. How hurt he is and how calmly he's taking it.
Either way, hope you enjoy writing this still.
oh, p.s. I'm you-stole-all-the-names on quizilla.
| Brezzia chapter 21 . 6/23/2008
That's one of my favorite quotes... "Tomorrow is a new day."
Excellent job, keep up your amazing work :)
| darkreaperlurking chapter 20 . 6/23/2008
Gosh, so many emotions all in one chapter. That was so deep, i even felt like crying. That was a good chapter, seriously.
| Brezzia chapter 20 . 6/23/2008
Nervous to read the next chapter...such a crazy mix of emotions.
Keep up the excellent work!
| Second to the Left chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Sincerely, this story is amazing
I can't even tell you how many times I've cried while I read this story.
I am so attached to Aidan and Devon at this point... you have to update. I honestly just want it to be over with so I can know how it all works out.
| Musickk Darling chapter 19 . 6/22/2008
Amazing story. I just spent my whole night reading it. You're words are so impactful...i feel like i've felt everything Devon has been feeling. Just incredible.
Please continue writing this story, i've grown so attached now :)
| Rino-chan chapter 9 . 6/21/2008
I'm surprised that you haven't gotten more reviews for this story. It's an amazing piece. I've been spending a few good hours reading, and I'm actually pretty hooked at the moment - and I can't wait to get to the end. You've got a very definite, personal style that gives Devon his characteristics through his narration, and I like that. It's singular, and you do it very well as an writer.
I'll drop another review soon, though I just want to say that this is one of the best stories I've read on this site, in terms of your style of writing. Keep it up!
| Brezzia chapter 18 . 6/19/2008
I really hate how ch. 18 ended...even above all his confusion, I think that his love for Aidan should have prevailed.
Ek, and it's cruel of you to leave it like that! Hm, now I have to wait. Keep it up..
| Brezzia chapter 3 . 6/19/2008
Aidan has great taste in music! Nice.
Loving your story :)
| Brezzia chapter 2 . 6/19/2008
Lol the whole situation is making me laugh. So funny :)
| Brezzia chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I loved it :)
Very good chapter, and I'm going to continue reading the rest. Ek can't wait to see where this goes.. it's different from most romances lol.
Good job, I'll spread the word so you'll get some more reviews.