Reviews for Rooftop |
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![]() ![]() ![]() "Can you see me?" I liked how this line expressed our capacity to feel invisible at times. "Nothing here but the wind." Beautiful imagery! |
![]() ![]() ![]() re: what the previous reviewer said, i actually loved how the feelings arfe all over the place. it was the most outstanding part of the poem. i'm kinda inspired so this is my reply back to you: up in the sky the city lights are so small you are here beside me too real to be true but still a complete stranger. no one is laughing at you now. yours is still better though, it's so raw. favourite, totally. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Very short, but it was good. I liked the feelings you were portraying, though they seemed a bit all over the place. Good job. |