Reviews for i love you, i miss you, come home to me |
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![]() ![]() ![]() i doubted putting milk in coffee for someone who's still asleep. mostly i liked this although i have to ask myself where is the little shininess that makes this stand out against others of its ilk? every story or poem or whatever needs its own special something. i don't find it here. i like it, but i didn't see that shine. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh, this is beautiful. It's honest and it touches a person to read it. I love the part about the sandwich and coffee, and how it was a tuna sandwich for breakfast. Which sounds disgusting to me, honestly, especially since the tuna may have been expired. I think most of this worked perfectly, but there were a few times I said, "I don't know." The line I had the biggest issue with was, "Our collision was very long ago but somehow I am still reeling from the aftereffects." It just seemed a bit awkward to me. But, aside from that, the piece as a whole was gorgeous. Loved it. Keep writing! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() this piece gives off such a sweet and nostalgic feelings _ |