Reviews for Being with You
terriestal-angell chapter 1 . 9/17/2008
You're right. This piece of fiction is riddled with cliches. And you know what's the scary thing? I was hanging on every last word, and close to tears by the end of the tale. Shiv. Nicely written. I haven't checked your profile to see if you've expanded this, but I do think you can expand this into the prequel. I'd really like to know how they met.
centenarian chapter 1 . 9/16/2008
SHIT. you made me cry. Like all out crying with tears and I just hugged my dog and squeezed the living daylights out of him. It was so sweet. Not cliche at all. Okay maybe a little but I mean, it was really sweet. You just made me want to get out there and find the ONE for me. Ugh. I love your stories Keep it up!
Megan chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
Wowsers. I am totally in love with this! It was fantastic fatacstics fantastic.
Black-Rose-Upon-Thorn chapter 1 . 9/15/2008
wow, lol. This is seriously the best one-shot i've ever read on fictionpress. Keep up the good work! This is going straight to my favourites.
flyingbikinis chapter 1 . 9/4/2008
Wow I loved this! Didn't strike me as overly cliche because you pulled it off so well. And I love Larissa! She's such a strong person. Awesome job :D
wistful-ambtions chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
aw! that was just complete awwness!
veautiful chapter 1 . 8/18/2008
wow, larissa's so understanding :c love it :)
Hazelnut Romance chapter 1 . 8/13/2008
sweet like honey
MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
aw yeah it's a cliche but it's so cute! - good job!

-MiScHiEvOuS sMiLeS
queen-of-the-sand-castle chapter 1 . 8/2/2008
Oh. My. God.

I think I'm gonna cry.

This was so infinitely sweet! There were some misplaced words that threw me for a loop, but other than that, this story was incredible. So. Cute!

Great job! This so goes on my Fav list!
asurana chapter 1 . 7/30/2008
I don't think this was cliche, not at all. In fact, I was expecting Brandon to break her heart, and Larissa to end up with Kirk, haha. THAT would've been cliche. But this? Not really. I mean, sure, Brandon being the rich, arrogant male is a bit cliche.. but what's a romance without some cliche? Boring, that's what it is. XD

So good job! I like this a lot, and I'm really, really proud of Brandon as a character. Not many guys would be able to figure out that they love their current girlfriend more, so that's pretty impressive. Keep up the good work!
Strangely Natural chapter 1 . 7/28/2008
Charming, sad and sweet, hope it wins.
Incurable Dreamer chapter 1 . 7/18/2008
Aw...that was really cute. I'm not really into cliche stuff, but you have to give yourself credit, because this was far from it. The story and the characters were very realistic. I loved Larissa for her courage. And I also liked how you didn't end it all neat and tidy. There are feelings that can never be erased, and I'm glad that you addressed that in your story. Thank you for this. Keep writing! )
Random Person chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
ASDFJKL;Twas great! The only critisism I have though is where you wrote:“Your masculinity outstands me,” I said, laughing lightly. - - - I think you meant astounds me not outstands - not sure though but like I said...yeah...rambling, moving on.

Otherwise. Fabulous ;]Keep up ze good work, ne?
virgo-valentina chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
This story was really well written and I really enjpyed this one-shot

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