Reviews for Never Mind
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
i like it. it's short, but yet tells a whole story. nice
403 Forbidden chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
I like the simplistic way that you express an entire idea in so few words because it allows each word its own power. I also like the general way the poem flows because it makes the end sound end-like. (Does that thing I just said even make sense? I don't know.)
multiples of six chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Aww.. I hate it when people do things like that. Even if it was an accident it still hurts if you don't know it at the time..
4tehlessthan3of0scoreintennis chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
accidents happen. sometimes, you just have to cool off and look it over again later. I like the "whatever" feeling. Keep writing!
Jennifer chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
This was confusing to me at first, but then it clicked. Love it, as always, but uh...I thought you loved you're best friend, or did you finally let go?
DefineBeauty chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
this has got a "yeah, whatever" tone to it, haha

it's' like you're saying "you had your chance, but oh well"

idk, i just kinda like it lol

i especially like the shortness of it, makes it better that way ]
Ashelin chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
That's sort of disappointing I'd think.

Good job.