Reviews for Leave & Return
NocturnalNerd chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
Wow, this poem holds a lot of meaning to me, and it seems it does for you as well. At first I thought it was about a friendship or relationship lost and that's where my mind went to my own painful memories. But when death came into the stanzas...it reminded me of something far more painful. I think I needed that reminder. Thank you.
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
"I feel as if I wanna let everything and run after it.".. did you mean wanna leave everything?

"I'dn't say such thing like"... I didn't say such things

I really liked the beginning about writing things only you can really understand. I also liked the part about files called memories, that was great. Nice job.
Imperia chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
wow, this had so much emotion to it. just reading through some of your work, and it's so amazing. you are a natural.
Living Life Free chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
This made me a little sad, but it also made me think how valuable life is. Very good poem.
XxXKristie MarieXxX chapter 1 . 6/20/2008
This made me kinda sad. But it was very well written. Nice job keep up the great work

XKristieMarieX

P.S. if no one reads your work its their loss _
criti-sized chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I haven't much of a person for poetry since my muse deserted me, but I really liked yours. The emotion in the poem that felt distant, yet sincerely close was awesome. And the words were great. The fact that they didn't rhyme made it even better.

C.S.
McKinley Cooper chapter 1 . 6/19/2008
I love the line about a starless sky and beggars in the street-great imagery.

McKinley