| Reviews for Forgive Me |
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   heal me forever chapter 1 . 11/10/2012 awwwwwwww funny yet cute |
| mia aurora chapter 1 . 5/15/2011 haha simple but sweet ! |
| S.L. Gunn chapter 1 . 2/6/2009 ahaha, i love it! |
| sunflower.kiss chapter 1 . 10/1/2008 Hahaha, that was funny and enjoyable! I loved it! |
| thesecretsavant chapter 1 . 7/11/2008 Cute? CUTE? How dare he! XDD That's awesome, how you didn't reveal it till the end. :D ~Fortie |
| Ashlee Pond chapter 1 . 6/28/2008 Hehe - very smart. I felt sorry for the characters at the start, particularly the girl. The last line though, is absolutely perfect. It made me laugh. What a wonderful piece. Bravo! |
| DisturbedKittenWriter chapter 1 . 6/20/2008 Aw. This is very...cute :D My only suggestion would be to drag the story out a bit more. You would get a better feeling for the characters that way. It would also add a hint of suspense to it. Besides that, this is a very sweet little story. |
| Hopelessly Cliche chapter 1 . 6/19/2008 Hey! Oh gosh, you have no idea how much I laughed after reading the ending! It was short, cute and so funny! Wow, I honestly never saw that one coming! Oh and you wrote 'piece' instead of peace, but other than that no mistakes! I can't stop laughing, that was just so FUNNY! lol, anywho, great job! :D HC xx |