That was so hot

I wished you continued this, I love your writing.

That was very charming :)

Hahahaha...it was great... .

I enjoyed this story. Although I had a hard time getting through the first few paragraphs; I liked the characters and their honesty. I could relate to Melissa's struggle to suppress her attraction. (I've sooo been there) I guess the only big critique I have is of the opening, maybe try to make the style of your writing a little more distinct? I dunno.

What I DO know is that I'm looking forward to reading about Melissa's adventures.

Hot.

I really enjoyed your story. You have a very catching writing style, it seems so realistic. I hope you write more stories as good as this one.

This is very entertaining to say the least! This is a very good story!

That's cute. I love it. Funny as hell, too.

This made me laugh a lot, especially the Tom Cruise thing. It's really well written and intersting too.