wow, poor cinderella.

I liked the idea of how cinderella's life wasnt so good after she got married; please write more and ellaborate on what should happen next

Great story you have there!

The twist is awesome, and perfectly illustrate the situation where happy ever after is not feasible!

I like it a lot. Easy and understandable.

Anyway, happy writing.

Oh man. This kinda made me laugh. Because of the harsh reality. But I like the way you write-it's easy to read and you get the point across. Hehe. I enjoyed this :]