Reviews for Lily
Vicky A chapter 1 . 8/23/2009
What a cute story. I feelt sad when I read about Lily, but her death mede the story more beautiful. Good luck in the future!
slee5133 chapter 1 . 8/22/2009
aww that is so frikin sweet
Dead Deactivated chapter 1 . 8/5/2009
That was absolutely the Sweetest thing in the world!
WindLessNiteZ chapter 1 . 8/4/2009
aww is so sweet i like how you can twist the whole story and the way lily and vannessa met . thx for writing plus posting .
Im Just Mlssundaztood chapter 1 . 7/18/2009
I loved this oneshot. Just the though of proposing on her grave kinda seemed disrespectful in a way.

everything else seemed realistic.

Great job on this.

-You were never ever there
Phemonoe chapter 1 . 6/29/2009
that... was super sweet :) I love your oneshots!
xShadowMaskx chapter 1 . 6/3/2009
;_; Aw, that's so sweet. D: I loved it. Really moving.
dragonfly kisses chapter 1 . 5/31/2009
Cool story. It's sad and happy. The last sentence ("Lily was blessing us") was also sad and happy. I mean, he asked her to marry him on her GRAVE! But I liked it.
animegirl214 chapter 1 . 5/26/2009
aw. tht's so cute! :]

this isn't like.. a true story is it? or was it all ur imagination? cuz if it was.. ur brilliant. tht's all i have to say. :P
chocolateandbananas chapter 1 . 5/24/2009
that was so nice.

i would like a friend like Lily.

she seems so nice. an angel, really.


thanks for sharing this work of yours, keep up the good work.
Narq chapter 1 . 5/23/2009
Wow. This is a totally breathtaking story. I loved the way it was quirky and funny at the start. The humor really launched me deep in the story. Then... near the end it got more sombre but it was just as good. I liked the sincere way you treated Lily's death. It is very appropriate.

JamieBell chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
I really enjoyed this. Very sweet! I would've liked to see each little vignette expanded and developed a little more (would've made for an extremely poignant style), but very nice work! :)
JWood chapter 1 . 5/22/2009
~~made me cry. great job!
singing love chapter 1 . 5/19/2009
this is one of the sweetest stories i've read on fictionpress. you worked the death in to the story so well. my eyes watered when i finished it.
MorbidAngelXxX chapter 1 . 5/11/2009
Wow, that was really touching. I liked it a lot. Good job.
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