Reviews for Brighter Than The Sun |
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jyska chapter 10 . 8/21/2008 Oh, I am so excited for this ball. Like you wouldn't believe. I don't really have any constructive criticism, except for in one of the first chapters when someone says 'hey'. I don't really think that was a salutation in (what I've assumed) is 18th century england. But other then that, I really like this story. Hopefully you'll up date soon! Jyska |
OoohLookACat chapter 10 . 8/21/2008 no no no no no! robbie should go back to doing delightfully wicked things to her! he will though - right eventually he's so not meant to be with that montgomery girl and mr jensen? strange speciman so far loved the chapter poor susie the feeling of hopelessness is so horrible can't wait for more izzie |
PRiNZeSSiN-LiNz chapter 10 . 8/20/2008 I have been waiting for an update for ages. Finally he's going to get so jealous when he sees Susie at the masquerade. Good work, keep it coming ) |
righthere431 chapter 10 . 8/20/2008 hehe i hope rob sees them and gets jealous ] |
kingrankar76 chapter 10 . 8/20/2008 Wow. They're both gonna get jealous. Susie with Jensen and Robbie with MIss Montgomery. Is Sam gonna be there? |
punkproud chapter 10 . 8/20/2008 i feel like reviewing again, lol i totally loved this can't wait for the next one 8) |
a little girl chapter 9 . 8/15/2008 aw! pretty! C: but i found it short :D well probably because i wanna read the next chapters :D plss plss plss update already! :D hehehe sorry if i sound demanding :P hahaha but yeah please update soon :D I super wanna read what'll happen next c: |
righthere431 chapter 9 . 8/14/2008 aw rob was jealous? cute |
happy ever afterxx chapter 9 . 8/14/2008 Oh wow I loved the update :) more soon? x |
TheQuilAndInk chapter 9 . 8/14/2008 OPEN YOUR EYES ROB! I love sam :) anywho great addition and please PLEASE, update soon. -YELLERS |
TheQuilAndInk chapter 8 . 8/14/2008 Oh I loved the last part ;) must go on |
emerald chapter 9 . 8/13/2008 *grin* Sam is adorable! And oh man, that kiss definitely was passionate. More, more, more! |
kingrankar76 chapter 9 . 8/13/2008 I absolutely adore Sam. |
OoohLookACat chapter 9 . 8/13/2008 ahh the obliviousness it'll be frustratively hilarious and gasp hints and the boy hasn't realised? poor susie she probably thinks she's done something wrong because she's just as oblivious as he is. and ooh another ball! and masquerade too this'll definitely be interesting i can't wait for more i'm so excited i love robbie and susie! him defending her and her tastes it's so adorable and gasp if robbie marries susie then the contract with the whatstheirnames is like... well it can't happen if he's already married right? brilliant its such a perfect solution! haha my theories are so sad izzie |
Lady R chapter 9 . 8/13/2008 oh, Sam is so bad! lol And, *sighs*, Robbie is the worse kind of blind! Anyway, another great chapter! |