Reviews for Brighter Than The Sun
jyska chapter 10 . 8/21/2008
Oh, I am so excited for this ball. Like you wouldn't believe.

I don't really have any constructive criticism, except for in one of the first chapters when someone says 'hey'. I don't really think that was a salutation in (what I've assumed) is 18th century england. But other then that, I really like this story.

Hopefully you'll up date soon!

Jyska
OoohLookACat chapter 10 . 8/21/2008
no no no no no!

robbie should go back to doing delightfully wicked things to her!

he will though - right

eventually

he's so not meant to be with that montgomery girl

and mr jensen?

strange speciman so far

loved the chapter

poor susie

the feeling of hopelessness is so horrible

can't wait for more

izzie
PRiNZeSSiN-LiNz chapter 10 . 8/20/2008
I have been waiting for an update for ages. Finally he's going to get so jealous when he sees Susie at the masquerade.

Good work, keep it coming )
righthere431 chapter 10 . 8/20/2008
hehe i hope rob sees them and gets jealous ]
kingrankar76 chapter 10 . 8/20/2008
Wow. They're both gonna get jealous. Susie with Jensen and Robbie with MIss Montgomery. Is Sam gonna be there?
punkproud chapter 10 . 8/20/2008
i feel like reviewing again, lol

i totally loved this

can't wait for the next one 8)
a little girl chapter 9 . 8/15/2008
aw! pretty! C: but i found it short :D well probably because i wanna read the next chapters :D plss plss plss update already! :D hehehe sorry if i sound demanding :P hahaha but yeah please update soon :D I super wanna read what'll happen next c:
righthere431 chapter 9 . 8/14/2008
aw rob was jealous? cute
happy ever afterxx chapter 9 . 8/14/2008
Oh wow I loved the update :) more soon? x
TheQuilAndInk chapter 9 . 8/14/2008
OPEN YOUR EYES ROB!

I love sam :)

anywho great addition and please

PLEASE, update soon.

-YELLERS
TheQuilAndInk chapter 8 . 8/14/2008
Oh I loved the last part ;)

must go on
emerald chapter 9 . 8/13/2008
*grin* Sam is adorable! And oh man, that kiss definitely was passionate. More, more, more!
kingrankar76 chapter 9 . 8/13/2008
I absolutely adore Sam.
OoohLookACat chapter 9 . 8/13/2008
ahh the obliviousness

it'll be frustratively hilarious

and gasp

hints and the boy hasn't realised?

poor susie

she probably thinks she's done something wrong

because she's just as oblivious as he is.

and ooh another ball!

and masquerade too

this'll definitely be interesting

i can't wait for more

i'm so excited

i love robbie and susie!

him defending her and her tastes

it's so adorable

and gasp

if robbie marries susie

then the contract with the whatstheirnames is like...

well it can't happen if he's already married right?

brilliant

its such a perfect solution!

haha my theories are so sad

izzie
Lady R chapter 9 . 8/13/2008
oh, Sam is so bad! lol

And, *sighs*, Robbie is the worse kind of blind!

Anyway, another great chapter!
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