This is a very interesting concept. You gave the idea some life with how you chose to write it. I don't think I've eve seen anything quite like it. Wonderful job.

*sighs*

this is lovely. the entire piece has an amazingly surreal feel to it.

i loved everything about the story. i actually got confused and scared when she said "just because it's in your head doesnt mean it's not real" no scared and confused arent the right feelings...um i dont know but i just felt like if she knew something. i dont know what i am saying now. i am just talking too much now. well anywaysi loved the story.

bye,

brokencrystal7