Reviews for Know Your Place SLASH |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Simply amazing! This is the best story I've ever read on this site and you are such an inspiration to me in my stories. The way you seamlessly told this story was awesome. It sucks that it's over but I will forever love Brick and Jace :) Great job! |
![]() ![]() Aww proper wish there was an epologue ! This is my 2nd time reading this fic and I love it! |
![]() ![]() ![]() That was a brilliantly writen, sweet and lovely and sexy coming out/of ages story. The last half of this chapter had me laughing so much, I loved the dynamic between the two of them. And it was lovely to see them both changing and growing throughout the story. Thanks for sharing - Pantu |
![]() ![]() ![]() Ooo, I'm so happy, this seems like a great start, I can't wait to read the rest AND its complete - happy days. Great writing and intriguing characters. Lovely stuff. -Pantu |
![]() ![]() I love this story I've already read it 5 times and I still can't get enough. Thank you for writing this! |
![]() ![]() This story is amazzzzzing (yes, with that many z's). But seriously, it's wonderful. Probably... no definitely, my favorite story on fictionpress :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS AWESOMESS |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aaaaah. This story. I was in the mood for a good story, and I'm usually good at digging around on fictionpress to find something I like, and I just did it again with this. (: Last night was the last of my Spring Break, and I start reading this at about midnight. Then I kept going and going, and when it hit 2 a.m. I was only on chapter 17 or something, and I was like, "Hmm. I wonder if I can finish reading this tonight." Then it was coming up on 3 in the morning and I was only on chapter 24 or something and I knew if I tried to finish it then... I would die. :O That's good though! You know you're good at writing when I'll sacrifice sleep to read it. (: And when it comes to the actual story itself, I loved it. At first Jace and Brick struck me as some funky names, but I totally got used to them over time, and now they just fit the characters perfectly. (: Like sometimes it all, "I just can't get over the fact that his name is Leif..." But not here! Brick is perfect as Brick, even though his real name is Tommy. Also, Brick. Man, I love that guy. He started out so...mean. And kind of scary. And I kind of pegged him as one of those bullies who's a bumbling idiot. But THEN. He turned into Mr. Honey Buns McSweet Pants. :p The character development with him was the best. Seriously. I tend to really enjoy stories where there's this chase between the two main peeps and it's about how they grow together. While at the beginning you can be reading it and wonder how in the world they're supposed to fall in love, when they despise each other or threaten to beat each other up. Yet if it's about some chick who's hated some dude since they were little and blah blah, I hate it. That's so cliche. :O But no! THIS. STORY. It was short and sweet and everything I love. (: I can definitely see a sequel come out of it, if you want to! Like, what happened when they told their moms and what people at school thought about the little showdown at Jace's birthday party can all be in it. Hint hint. Wink. (: Nah, but that's your choice as an author. The ending was great as is! I'm sad it's over, though! Thanks for writing it and finishing it! I know trying to finish stuff can be frustrating at times, but I'm glad you did. (: xx |
![]() ![]() ![]() loool...I think I love the ending the most:D and the whole story too, of course! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Verrrry goooooodddd, j'adore! |
![]() ![]() ![]() What a cute story. Had really good pacing, romance wasn't rushed and there were some believable obstacles between Jace and Brick. Too bad I never had a romance like this in high school... or a hot bully. lol |
![]() ![]() Great! Thanks, I really liked this story. |
![]() ![]() This was awesome! I gave a flying zebra about the characters and everything! Congrats on making it emotional without being all sappy and toothache-sweet. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Great! I loved it. |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is the second time I've read this story and I just can't stop loving it. You're a wonderful writer. I would've read this even without all the nice boy smex. ;) It makes me laugh so hard I choke on my laughter. Never stop writing. Sincerely BIN ps I couldn't review for the last chappy for some reason... |