I think it was a terrible shame for you to rip most of the story from here and leave only some for a preview! I understand your desire to make money from your writing, but I still think you could have left this since it had been up and finished for a while and perhaps sold new work? I speak as someone who read and loved this story on here.

It's an excellent story. I like the flow. But please. PLEASE. Put breaks in when you change scenes. It's confusing to the reader if you don't.

So what's the name of the book, and your name? I would like t0 read this book

You should put that it's just a preview in the description. I can't buy stuff online, so I was a bit upset when I started reading this, only to find that I won't be able to finish. Putting 'Preview' in the description would have been better.

cute FYI :D

Good for you, girl! However, I won't be able to buy it. Because i'm British. *cries* I live in the UK. So I won't be able to read it again! :( :(

CONGRATS! CONGRATS! CONGRATS!

*pout* yet another story I love rereading taken off the internet and yet more money I'll have to scrounge around for to be able to pay for it (and here I'm still saving up enough to get your other stories in pdf or the other format-thingy) :P

This is just awesome news, we have to celebrate *starts jumping around and dancing wildly*

*notices Cavan and Gair dancing away in the middle of the crowd - drools*

Woop, Love this one to!

Totally saw that coming. Once I realized both princes had to see the Emperor at the same time and that both princes hated each other, then it was pretty clear to me. But then again, I've read a lot of slash so I can pick up on these things. Great story so far!

I enjoyed reading your story very much

I like your characters and I was sad it was over so soon.

:3 neat... can't wait to see the real plan for children though like i said before i have several ideas *reads WAY too many mpreg. stories* though i have to say Feys... i never considered that one i'll have to add it to my mental list .-

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1) Gair xD sorry Cavan but Gair is epic

2) :3 is a Yaoi story and i'm a Yaoi fan girl what do you THINK my fav. scene is? The Sex duh!

3)um Sorry Elanor but when she visited the Castle she was kinda a bitch...

4)Both :3 cause i'm evil like that!

5) Uh hn... can't think of anything.

6)*has millions of ideas for the heir thing* :D *shakes head* umm i can't wait to read the sequal and will be invading your profile and bothering you if i see it is not done :3

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I am way, WAY late finding this story, but I'm unbelievably happy that I did. Fantastic piece! Great plot, great characters, great smut, great and dry humor... Oh yeah, definitely reading this again in the near future. Thank you for this! Will beg and grovel for more stories from you!

Love and cherries,

Wingstar

To answer your question at the end of the chapter - I would have been damn surprised if there had been any princesses. But I was actually kind of hoping there would be, because there's always a danger of boredom when using a cliche. But then again, some of the best stories are born from cliches, and cliches that are twisted in a new way. Anyhow, I'm a little bit worried how this will turn out but of course I'm reading onward..

Btw, I just love the details you have developed, like the colours of the Chiel and their similarity to Estveld. It shows you have clearly thought on it.

Wow, this looks good. I have only read the first chapter but I'm already hooked.

You've done a great job in introducing so many new characters and still making them all seem real, not just names. The same thing can be said about the world you have created. A lot of information is given, but it's given very effortlessly.

Continuing on..