|Reviews for Dark Angel|
| Harlee Rae chapter 2 . 12/9/2008
WRITE MORE! THAT WAS AWESOME!
| MyFriendIsADork chapter 2 . 7/27/2008
It's interesting so far and now im totally hooked, please update soon.
| Kwote chapter 2 . 6/24/2008
Awesome chapter! I noticed a few spelling errors (sorry, I had to point them out!):
"ii fear, unable to speak": Is it supposed to be "i"?
"mu mouth and I fell back": Is it supposed to be "my"? ;) Just thought I'd say that.
"The walls appeard transparent": Appeared :). I know you probably typed it in a hurry so I'm not criticizing or anything ;P.
Anywoot, this was another amazin' chapter, although I was mad at Beaux for unplugging herself from the machine! Gawrsh, she shouldn't have done that! ;), Anyway, I wanna hear more about her Mom and I wanna read more about Jonas and Andrea! Anyway, another awsum chapter, can't wait for more, and thanks for updating so soon!
Love Yours Truly P
| Silencia chapter 2 . 6/23/2008
I'm glad you lik all my crazy reviews! I really like Jonas and Andrea! They're so nice! And I need to go now, keep on writing!
| Estelin chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
this was great. keep up the good work. i can't wait for more.
| Kwote chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Wow, this is an awsom story. That's what I like what authors do: Beat up the main character as much as they can because they end up winning in the end. I can't wait for Stepmonster to get hers! Gawr she makes me mad. Anyway awesome writing, can't wait for more and to find out if there really are such things as Z-fans! Haha,
~Your Dearest Spouse
| DisturbedKittenWriter chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
*squeal* This is so good! I love the narration and the characters. I hope you continue this.
| Silencia chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Amazing! Please continue, this story is amazing!