I like your story! Very well-written. Much better than mine. If you don't mind, I have some stories too. TCR and Stargazer I'm working on. Would you like to see/review? Sorry to ask. You and I both like anime! Keep up the good work on this story!

Sounds interesting )

I only come on here now and then but would like to see how this goes.

And by looking at your profile, we seem to like similar stuff too lol

Really good chapter!

Update soon!

-Tekk

Wow! Amazing description!

I must say the plot line is interesting...and the minor mechanical errors didn't distract me too much (because there weren't many! Yay!). Nice work.

Perhaps you'd like to check out some of my stories. :)

Yes, and the adventure is about to begin! I think it's sweet how his Grandpa's taking his Grandson under his wing. I wonder how long it'll be before Nemjiro figures out who he truly is?

really good job! my faves weeh~

really wonderful characterization...very nice prologue by the way! i'm very curious of what nemjiro has in store for me as a reader! lol..well anyway, i'll continue reading! )

Great story, I really like your writing style and the plot is pretty interesting so far. My only regret is that I started reading when my laptop battery was almost dead...so sad. I'll definetely read the rest of the story though. Keep up the great work.

~Kai-chan

WOW! All I can say is wow and GREAT job! :) It's a very good story. I love it! Please, continue!

Imperfection1610

really good actually, an interesting story no doubt.

make a new chapter soon and keep up the good work.

For some reason I think au might be a fan on Final Fantasy and Breath of Fire 1 and 2.

are you?

they're video games.

wow.

thats depressing. so sad.

good job, really got me into it as though i was feeling his sadness.

such deep words from a little kid. XD

really good chapter, i already read 3 chaps, gotta finish now.

hmm. an interesting plot.

very well done.

if your wondering, in Angel&Devil, I'm doing Maya and Silencia is doing Daisetsu. cuz...were both making the story.

i really like this, the introduction is very enticing.

and Nemjiro. A japanese name i believe?

that just makes me like the story even more

(im pretty fast, aren't i?)

This chapter was so cool. It's getting more interesting now that the story isn't in the past anymore.

There's just one thing. You write very long sentences. It might be a little easier to read if you made one long sentence into two shorter ones. A sentence should never take up a whole paragraph you know.