|Reviews for Summer of '08|
| Lullabye chapter 2 . 7/20/2008
Wow, this is really good.
It does seem like an actual diary, which I have to say is...
Keep writing, I've only read two chapters and so far I already love it.
| Serendipity Haze chapter 21 . 7/18/2008
Ugh I know what you mean, being average sucks. My friends don't understand that, and are always like you should be happy you are so skinny. Whatever!
Update soon please!
| blurrylights chapter 20 . 7/17/2008
Poor Melody! Stalker boyrfriends are intense. Why are you not eating? I'm sure you're tiny already. That's a big no no raye.
| FuzzyDoom chapter 19 . 7/17/2008
Wow. I don't know if you type this stuff up on the spot or if you actually write it then change it for here but...wow. This is just like a normal teenagers life. I'm 15 so I understand what its like but wow, wherever you guys live you have some problems. Maybe its because I'm an Okie(:P) and there's not that bad of problems with drugs and crap (still here, just not that bad) but we both do seem to have the same problem with our families. (Except I like my dad) Anyways, great story and keep posting.
| blurrylights chapter 19 . 7/16/2008
This was a funny chapter. Good job for saying no. Saying no is a good thing, unless someone offers you a free publishing deal- then you say yes. Or if they offer an endless amount of cash to buy more designer stuff...yes, then you definitely say yes...
| 403 Forbidden chapter 18 . 7/14/2008
This is told very well, it would make a good book.
| Serendipity Haze chapter 18 . 7/14/2008
Bahaha, he called you while you were taking a crap? Wow, that is love right there.
| blurrylights chapter 18 . 7/14/2008
This was an interesting chapter...
Bikini sounds cute btw...
| Serendipity Haze chapter 16 . 7/11/2008
Ha, you make me laugh. I don't think I mentioned that in my last review. Keep up the posting please!
| Serendipity Haze chapter 15 . 7/9/2008
It would be scary if I posted my journal on here. It would be so similar to yours! XD
I do enjoy reading your journal. It's an honest story, and you are totally real with everything. I like how you honestly state the facts, what you heard, and how you feel about things.
Welcome to my favourite stories list!
Update soon please!
| 403 Forbidden chapter 13 . 7/5/2008
This is really good (except in a bad way, like when you read People magazine) please keep updating.
| blurrylights chapter 13 . 7/4/2008
Your mom seems okay...
Whats longboarding? Excuse my cluelessness...
| blurrylights chapter 12 . 7/3/2008
This chapter was awesome too- family wise- no one's family is perfect. I have this totally conservative Indian family that can be really...what's a nice word...protective/overbearing. My parents don't let me date. My culture believes in arranged marriages, and my family is vegetarian, so I have to marry a vegetarian Indian with the same religion as me. Life's tough- I just deal with it. You lose some and gain some. I mean, i'm lucky in that sense to- my dad works in the area, but his hours are like 6am-9pm (vice prez of a engineering company), so I barely see him.
Good luck with your family- post again soon!
P.S. I just posted Irys, a new sci fi/supernatural story- please R&R!
| 403 Forbidden chapter 11 . 7/2/2008
This is a great journal. Not just because of the things that happen to you in real life, but the way you tell it. And you really should tell "Damien" that you are posting this. You seem to really love him and it would be really bad for you to lose him over something like this. Tell him that it helps you cope with your feelings or whatever, I don't know. Anyways, good job and keep writing.
| blurrylights chapter 11 . 7/2/2008
Thanks for replying again- I ask way too many questions. It's just that when I get into something, questions pop out.
This chapter was really funny! The shark incident and then the part where you were sitting behind the sign and there were flower and you couldn't read it- it all made for an entertaining chapter.
Good job with your decision to stop cutting yourself. Oh, and laser surgery REALLY isn't worth it. I think you should keep them to remind you of your strength (or something corny like that) :) :) :)