Reviews for it's breaking me
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Aw… ‘tis sadness… Loosing the trust of another in hopes to keep them. It is truly heart rendering! I enjoyed reading your poem. The only thing that bugs me is that there are those who lie all the time to manipulate a relationship and they suffer not the consequences that they deserve however, it is those who truly do care that may do something out of desperation (not saying it is right) that are condemned and furthermore no longer trusted. Weird how the world works. Anyway I enjoyed your poem. Keep writing! )