Reviews for You're like air I breathe
Scarlett Wynter chapter 1 . 8/27/2008
The first 3 lines are downright awesome. Great poem!
Iccle Fairy chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
very good!
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 7/2/2008
I've read other poems with the same thoughts but this one is different in a good way. You recognize the fact you cant literally breath them in but the person is dearly needed. Well done
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Good piece. Nice work.

Twilight Starr
simpleplan13 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
The simile is nice and very relateable. I'm not sure why the first stanza is a question, but other than that I liked it a lot.
PoetryQueen chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
This poem is true. I love the first lines you have. I really liked them. God is always there, but we can't see him. It is so easy to believe that there is air, but so hard to believe that their is a God. I like how this poem somewhat covers blind faith without using the words blind faith. This poem comes from the heart. I really enjoyed it.
brokencrystal7 chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
easy for me to relate to this. good poem
aberlemno chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
I like the repetition. It has quite a nice flow, but I particularly like the first three lines, they're a very good opening.
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
good repetition
Qzie chapter 1 . 6/22/2008
Oh I rather like this. It's got this soothing feeling, even if a little bittersweet because of the speaker just wanting to be alone, even though they know they're not going to be alone. I'm not entirely sure if that came out right... wonderful poem. Chat later. -Qzie