|Reviews for Warriors of Earth|
| Ventus Shadows chapter 6 . 9/27/2008
I can see the improvement in your writing, and although some of it is a bit confusing, I think it's pretty good. Keep it up.
| Ventus Shadows chapter 5 . 7/26/2008
Your welcome, I was happy to help.
| Ventus Shadows chapter 1 . 7/14/2008
Too much happened in this chapter, you could have spilt it up and added more detail to it. Other than that, this chapter was okay.
| Wolfcry-Sama chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
So...is it over? A little confusing. I'm not going to give you the whole editor's critique, but some phrasing was fishy, e.g. eyes can't talk. They can flash, but they don't speak, so it sounds awkward when you have a princess speak through their flashing eyes. If that makes any sense.
An interesting plot, though. If this isn't over and there will be more chapters - even though it sounds finished - I'll be interested enough to read the second chapter. Keep writing!