Hm, what good luck they have. It's a good thing they found a creek, huh?

I really liked the details in this chapter.

I'm also sorry for the shortness of this review. I'm about to pass out. I think I've been apologizing a lot lately...:P

All in all, I really enjoyed this chapter.

-Ella

Oh, gosh. What kind of a reviewer am I? This is rather late, so I apologize for that.

Anyways, I really liked this chapter and enjoyed reading it. The more I read, the more I'm interested.

June, 2034...That surprised me as it surprised them. And so did the dead body. Eek. But I'm a girl, I get pretty freaked out by dead things. P

I'm off to read the next chapter. Sorry again!

-Ella

Liking it a lot. But theres something I don't get.

Why are they off in the future anyway? You haven't made that quite clear.

Other than that, it's good and I can't wait for the next update :D

Becca

Whoa, this was really good. I'm really looking forward to finding out where they are. The story's getting more and more interesting as it goes along.

And I hope you liked your pasta. Haha. P

-Ella

Well, this is different than most things I've read. And I mean that in an entirely good way. The summary of your story really captured my attention, and I'm glad I took the time to read this.

I'm really interested in whatever it was that they hit. For some odd reason, I think it could be a bear. Maybe because I saw the words 'big' and 'brown'. But it's probably not even close to being that. Haha.

Just a thought: the title of this chapter says "We're Definately Lost". Shouldn't 'Definately' be 'Definitely'? I dunno, I was just thinking.

Anyways, great job on this. I can't wait to see what happens next!

-Ella K.

still liking it. Can't wait for more :D

Ooh, tension! Love the tension and it's only like 11 lines in.

You are brilliant! lol

Looking forward to the next update :D