Awesome.

Lol. I liked this chapter.

He told her she looked like a cow! lol.

Boobies? You're not supposed to know that yet, Jake.

I love the story. Its a very typical cliche ;) well, you did make a huge mistake though. At the end, you mentioned about Nathan meeting Calista's Grandma. He met her before already :p well other than that, I love the story! (:

AW! IT WAS SO SWEET!

I LOVED THE STORY )

NATE IS SO SWEET!

Wow! Cool story! I really enjoyed reading it! x

The story was really realistic (well, to the extent a fiction can go anyway)! Character personification was really strong, I can really see their personalities emerging as the stor went on.

Really Really REALLY well written!

Delineations . Alyona

This is great! There I was searching in Fanfiction, looking for a good story to read and then I decided to read something from FictionPress and your story popped out. I love it! You never know what's going to happen.

You're a great author,

~Blue

aww so cutee

omg! that was such a cute story. can't wait until river and midnight's one though!

wow. this was really good...and i cant wait to go read lucas & mimi's story...i'm going to rush over to that once i've finished typing this review...so see you there )

AWESOME ending! I loved this story and the characters :P

That was a super-duper cute ending. (:

I really liked this story, it really brought out the "awws". I WANT A NATHAN OF MY OWN!

I like the first chapter. I think it was a nice way to begin a story because it set up the character's situation nicely without info-dumping. Well done

I did notice one error:

A little less than half-way through you wrote:

"he was the school’s swimming captain therefore he was bound to have six packs but six packs or no sick packs, Calista still did not give a damn about him."

I think it's "he was bound to have a six pack, but six pack or no six pack, Calista still..."

hope that helps.

btw, Calista is a pretty name & and the Nathan-Satan rhyme was cute :)

i came across this story and i absolutely luv it!nathan and calista are so sweet together!i really love ure writing style:)keep the good work!:)

Oh my gosh this is so good!

I love your writting style and it is like so romantic lol,

It is 1 a.m now i just finish reading and my brain is like going dead le. i cant wait to read more from you!

Ciaos

Very sugary story :)