Reviews for Tamed : Nathan & Calista
Aradia Cloud chapter 13 . 3/4/2010
Aradia Cloud chapter 9 . 3/4/2010
Lol. I liked this chapter.

He told her she looked like a cow! lol.

Boobies? You're not supposed to know that yet, Jake.
hanistar chapter 21 . 2/28/2010
I love the story. Its a very typical cliche ;) well, you did make a huge mistake though. At the end, you mentioned about Nathan meeting Calista's Grandma. He met her before already :p well other than that, I love the story! (:
Floppy125 chapter 21 . 12/13/2009


Alice Novak chapter 21 . 10/28/2009
Wow! Cool story! I really enjoyed reading it! x

The story was really realistic (well, to the extent a fiction can go anyway)! Character personification was really strong, I can really see their personalities emerging as the stor went on.

Really Really REALLY well written!

Delineations . Alyona
Ederra chapter 21 . 10/9/2009
This is great! There I was searching in Fanfiction, looking for a good story to read and then I decided to read something from FictionPress and your story popped out. I love it! You never know what's going to happen.

You're a great author,

cookiewolf chapter 5 . 10/6/2009
aww so cutee
Hazelnut Romance chapter 21 . 9/24/2009
omg! that was such a cute story. can't wait until river and midnight's one though!
calasin chapter 21 . 9/13/2009
wow. this was really good...and i cant wait to go read lucas & mimi's story...i'm going to rush over to that once i've finished typing this see you there )
SmearedRedTearDrops chapter 21 . 7/9/2009
AWESOME ending! I loved this story and the characters :P
xN00DLES chapter 21 . 7/4/2009
That was a super-duper cute ending. (:

I really liked this story, it really brought out the "awws". I WANT A NATHAN OF MY OWN!
decadebydecade chapter 1 . 6/25/2009
I like the first chapter. I think it was a nice way to begin a story because it set up the character's situation nicely without info-dumping. Well done

I did notice one error:

A little less than half-way through you wrote:

"he was the school’s swimming captain therefore he was bound to have six packs but six packs or no sick packs, Calista still did not give a damn about him."

I think it's "he was bound to have a six pack, but six pack or no six pack, Calista still..."

hope that helps.

btw, Calista is a pretty name & and the Nathan-Satan rhyme was cute :)
vesta-star chapter 21 . 6/24/2009
i came across this story and i absolutely luv it!nathan and calista are so sweet together!i really love ure writing style:)keep the good work!:)
angelsinheaven87 chapter 21 . 6/18/2009
Oh my gosh this is so good!

I love your writting style and it is like so romantic lol,

It is 1 a.m now i just finish reading and my brain is like going dead le. i cant wait to read more from you!

AJ southern chapter 21 . 6/9/2009
Very sugary story :)
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