kudos on a great story, it was amazing!

Congratulations on completing such an amazing story! I really liked this one because your characters, plot, and diction were so very good. It could use a little work on the details of the setting and the conveyence of the society that your characters live in but otherwise it was very well written. You've got quite a few spelling and grammer errors but I'm sure you'll fix those in time. This was such a good story. You should consider publishing it someday. Congrats!

ahahaha! That was so awesome the way the whole family just turned on Lady M, lol she deserves it anyways. I can't wait to read the sequel about Lucas and Mimi!

Well this was a good story, high-school romances are not normal my favourite genre, but i make a exception now and then if the story is really good. And this time it was absolutely worth it. Great writing. One of my favourite parts was jakes and your hair looks like a toiletbrush! it had me really cracking up! What i also liked was that Nathan wasnt giving up on them and Nancys interference. Now Im Curious to what happens to Lucas and Mimi, but even more so about River and Midnight. Good Writing keep it up!

So I loved the story :) I can't wait to see the others.

o.0 u remembered me!. still reading of course, cant wait for lucas and mimi and im geting ahead of myself but im really really looking forward to river and miles/midnight's story.

constructive criticism, dear;

you were comma crazy.

“Okay, I have a day off tomorrow. Do you want to have dinner tomorrow night?” Samantha asked, she was trying to put her family back together again, without her husband Carlos; she knew she could do it. Samantha could feel that her children were slowly drifting away from her and she couldn’t afford that, they were the only family she had."

could be; Samantha could feel that her children were slowly drifting away from her, but she couldn't afford that. They were the only family she had.

you can't type like you're speaking

it's quite irritating, really.

it flows better, as well.

but i love your idea.

all you need is some editing with your sentence structures,

work out the rusty spots

and viola! a masterpiece.

Great ending! I loved their story! Good job!

OMG i can't believe its over...okay scratch that...CANT WAIT FOR LUCAS AND MIMI!

xoxox

Love you Lady K!

this is good

aw

SUCH a good chapter )

*sniff* can't believe its over :(

but it was totally worth it all in the end D

love this story haha

it's too addictive :)

izzie

well i cant believe there story is finished it was a perfect ending and i loved the fight well cant wait till the sequal post it soon and thank you for fnishing ]

love bee

Good job on this story! I can't wait for the sequel, Lucas and Mimi sound like an interesting couple.

WOW ! this story is awesome and i can't wait for Lucas and Mimi's story

Aww

It's so sad and happy and... many other words... that this ended!

I adore the ending

BUT

BUT

I want to hear more about Tristan. He's soo funny. XD

I will continue to read your stories.

I can't remember but were you the one who wrote a story about a celebrity and some girl... -can't remember-?

If it wasn't you... then... ignore that last and next question.

XD

If it was... are you going to rewrite it?

Gosh, if it wasn't you I'd feel like an idiot right now. .

XD