Reviews for Betrayal
InkWitch chapter 1 . 12/31/2010
Drishi chapter 1 . 9/19/2010
Interesting way of showing the pain in a person's heart. But it shows that you have very less experience in pain, cause its not as heart-breaking as I hoped it should be. Good luck Aswira. By the way this is Dushyant here
risaisis chapter 1 . 10/10/2009
I loved the line "million smiles / fake the world". Nice use of repetition! _

The Exuberant chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
good poem