Reviews for Closed
my own prince chapter 1 . 9/2/2009
omg. first off I want to say, "WOW. what a coincidence." I mean, my favorite author here, "the milk bottle" (link on my profile if you're interested) posted these pictures of her travels and then she posted these pictures of her trip to Dubai where she put up pictures of this mall of the emirates and such, I was so fascinated - and then I found you and you live in DUbai! And this happened all in the same day! Hahaha!

Well, I thought this was a powerful poem - though hindered by the misspelling of "your" and a missing period. I dunno, I always felt that poems should be carefully written because there are so few words, each one should count. :P

But nontheless, powerful stuff. :P
A.K. Zhuang chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Hmm... i think this one's alright! I mean, it does touches the heart and explains how some might feel. And i feel that way too.