Reviews for I'm Tired, I'm Dead
Amethyst Oceana chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Wow. This was so incredibly... just wow.

This poem seriously captivated me. It was very strong... dark, but strong.

I'm inferring that this person was murdered and someone saw the murder but didn't say who killed him, right?

Or am I way off?

Well, anyways, just wow. This just reminds me about our society and its problem with violence. But this also had a deeper truth to it about death.

Keep up the good writing.
The Candle Thief chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
Simple words, but the use of the rhythm and the bolding are cleverly done.

-Ramen
The Exuberant chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
dude this poem totaly rocked my socks off!

which is a good thing...

great poem!

i liked the rhyming!
lymli chapter 1 . 6/23/2008
it's kinda hopeless, but the end I think is a powerful message.