Reviews for Only the Benefits |
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![]() ![]() ![]() THAT WAS SO AWESOME IT MAKES ME WANT TO GIVE YOU A HUG And FYI, I don't give anyone hugs, except my family. And my best friends. BUT ASIDE FROM THEM . . . |
![]() ![]() ![]() . So fluffy |
![]() ![]() ![]() YEAH KITTY |
![]() ![]() ![]() Aha now Evan likes her, the nerd likes her, and her friend and Lucas are going out. |
![]() ![]() ![]() EVIL EVIL BACKSTABING EVIL LUCAS |
![]() ![]() This story is so cute! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This is a cute story :) a little fast, but good. Really sucks someone ripped it off and published it |
![]() ![]() I love the story, i held off with commenting untill now. there are a few things i would change. everything seemed to happen really fast there was little time to "leave it to the reader" when it came to guessing what would happen next. Im left feeling like the story shouldnt have end yet, and wondering how the hell she got banana in her hair! all in all it was a good story i just wish it had been longer and i do but dont get why you ended it with a "10 years later" thing. it seems a little well interseting that they all work pretty much together... i dont see that ever happening in real life. but anyway you did a great job and i hope you keep writing. best wishes, R |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hiya, So you don't know me and I don't know you, but we've both been ripped off by some dude claiming our stories. He's sniped yours and posted it up on Barnes and Noble under a fake name, and is selling it for profit. w/only-the-benefits-jj-arbams/1112830133?ean2940015312706 (If that link doesn't go through b/c of FP, you can search B&N for "only the benefits abrams and it'll show up). Thought I'd give you a head's up. |
![]() ![]() Yo, anybody wanna buy a turkey? PM me |
![]() ![]() ![]() omg the ending of this chapter. hilarious! |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was short but I looooove every bit of the story! :) It's such a treat to read! Even though I didn't know when Lucas started to like Kelsie because he seemed to be annoyed with her before. Is it the time when they kissed? Haha. You probably won't be able to answer this but yeah, it's an awesome story! Thank you for sharing it with us! :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() I just found this story and I loved it! I didn't realize until just now that you published it like 4 years ago :P but still, great job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() I almost read the whole story. It was amazing! I loved every word. It was extremely well-written and I'm glad that I took a look. Great job. C: |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hello there! I just finished reading your story and I just wanna say that I loved it! My favorite part would actually have to be the epilogue. There's something very fun about it and I love Kelsie and Lucas' relationship. I'd love to read more of your stories! -Vanilla Sonne |