Reviews for Only the Benefits
Guest chapter 16 . 12/26/2013
This story is so cute!
gknight228 chapter 16 . 9/21/2013
This is a cute story :) a little fast, but good. Really sucks someone ripped it off and published it
booklover chapter 16 . 5/8/2013
I love the story, i held off with commenting untill now. there are a few things i would change. everything seemed to happen really fast there was little time to "leave it to the reader" when it came to guessing what would happen next. Im left feeling like the story shouldnt have end yet, and wondering how the hell she got banana in her hair! all in all it was a good story i just wish it had been longer and i do but dont get why you ended it with a "10 years later" thing. it seems a little well interseting that they all work pretty much together... i dont see that ever happening in real life. but anyway you did a great job and i hope you keep writing.
best wishes,
Sasha L. Miller chapter 1 . 2/10/2013

So you don't know me and I don't know you, but we've both been ripped off by some dude claiming our stories. He's sniped yours and posted it up on Barnes and Noble under a fake name, and is selling it for profit.


(If that link doesn't go through b/c of FP, you can search B&N for "only the benefits abrams and it'll show up). Thought I'd give you a head's up.
Chris Rock chapter 1 . 1/23/2013
Yo, anybody wanna buy a turkey? PM me
mydreamadventure chapter 6 . 9/1/2012
omg the ending of this chapter. hilarious!
ndagutierrez chapter 16 . 5/24/2012
It was short but I looooove every bit of the story! :) It's such a treat to read! Even though I didn't know when Lucas started to like Kelsie because he seemed to be annoyed with her before. Is it the time when they kissed? Haha. You probably won't be able to answer this but yeah, it's an awesome story! Thank you for sharing it with us! :)
thisismyusername chapter 16 . 1/21/2012
I just found this story and I loved it! I didn't realize until just now that you published it like 4 years ago :P but still, great job!
marketta chapter 16 . 12/26/2011
I almost read the whole story. It was amazing! I loved every word. It was extremely well-written and I'm glad that I took a look. Great job. C:
Vanilla Sonne chapter 16 . 8/30/2011
Hello there! I just finished reading your story and I just wanna say that I loved it!

My favorite part would actually have to be the epilogue. There's something very fun about it and I love Kelsie and Lucas' relationship.

I'd love to read more of your stories!

-Vanilla Sonne
XXXSyxAdeleXXX chapter 1 . 7/28/2011
Like the beginning , good use of description. Keep it up XD

Would like to see how it pans out!
BeBzY chapter 16 . 4/29/2011
:D naw soo cute ;)
nicaaaaa chapter 16 . 4/26/2011
The story was very hilarious and cute. I love it ;)
AbstractDreamLander chapter 16 . 4/10/2011
I read this last night but the review button wasn't working. So here is mt review:

Woah! I love these types of stories but could never find one I really loved, until now. You are awesome!
I-am-happy chapter 16 . 12/17/2010
Good story girlie! Very cute indeed!

Smiled at every word I read... my cheeks are hurting now! Ahh! Well I really loved it!

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