Reviews for Only the Benefits |
---|
![]() ![]() ![]() Oh. My. God. This story is perfect! Kelsie is just so funny! I really liked this first chapter! I'm definitely going to read further. Congrats ;D -Suhpheeah |
![]() ![]() ![]() I love the way she blackmailed Lucas into agreeing to her plan. Once again, good job. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I noticed one mistake: "cacky shorts." Instead of "cacky", it should be "Khaki." I really like the concept of this story, it reminds me a little bit of Drive Me Crazy, but you have enough details that make the story unique and interesting. Good job! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Really good starter chapter. The whole senior/sophomore thing? So sad. I remember those days of being a sophomore and thinking dating a senior would be the best. lol I like the chemistry between Kelsie and Lucas |
![]() ![]() ![]() ~*Nice story...Hope U can update soon! ) ) ) ) ) ) ) )*~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() YES! They are finally together! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Woo, just read all this today, and I'm absolutley loving it so far! Hope you'll UPDATE again soon, it's captured my interest! |
![]() ![]() ![]() So, how did the bananas get in her hair? Aw I love them together and I'm happy for Dee. I just ope that she figures out a way to solv her hair problem. Probably will have to rinse it in the sink! Is she all sweaty, ew! Cuz it said she was drenched in sweat when she woke up, I would have taken a shower anyways. I mean Lucas won't be too mad, will he? Cuz he's falling for her lke really hard! Update soon! and I hope ypu did well on your finals! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Hahaha, seriously... I love this story already, and I'm only on chapter five D Its awesome! |
![]() ![]() ![]() This story's awesome D I already love Kelsie's character. |
![]() ![]() ![]() see, what i dont get, is why if she had a second date with devon, why was she acting like such a bitch? i mean, yeah i get the jealousy thing and all but come on dee. but anywhos. LOL. how did that banana get in her hair? poor kelsie. bad day already. loves :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was terrible. I hated it. You should never write. Ok, ok, I'm lying, it was ok. No, no, kidding, it was good. Alright, great. Fine, it was so fantastical I should bow down to you and worship your superior writing skills forever. ...I'm lying, let's go back to great. Ok, don't update soon, I am wondering where the banana came from... I have to go, it was fun writing this while you sat behind me... -jazz |
![]() ![]() I'm too lazy to log in. Anyway, I love the story so far. I would've reviewed every chapter I missed (which is a lot) but school got in the way. I know, a very lame excuse, but I'm stickin' by it. (Lol) Anyway, this chapter! Loved it! The banana thing made me laugh so hard. That's what my reaction would be. And the eyeliner incident! Gold! Solid gold! I could totally see that happening. Update soon! This story is too good to be put on hold (i'm being a hypocrite, lol) ~Crystal |
![]() ![]() Loved it, I'd really appreciate a good humored revenge from Dee, but don't break up the friends, please! of course u're the author, keep going! |
![]() ![]() Keep up the good work and don't forget to update. |