Like the beginning , good use of description. Keep it up XD

Would like to see how it pans out!

:D naw soo cute ;)

The story was very hilarious and cute. I love it ;)

I read this last night but the review button wasn't working. So here is mt review:

Woah! I love these types of stories but could never find one I really loved, until now. You are awesome!

Good story girlie! Very cute indeed!

Smiled at every word I read... my cheeks are hurting now! Ahh! Well I really loved it!

Muah!

Aw, how freaking cute! I love your story!

Haha, this story was surprisingly hilarious. I wasn't expecting it to be very good (sorry) but i was wrong this is great, one of the most original i've read on here yet! i officially love this story!

Man...this was a phenomenal story! One of the best I've ever read! Sweet and short (but I wish yu didn't cut it SO dang short :(!)

You should so totally write a sequel to this or another story like this and make it a series like the Night World series by LJ Smith (those are some totally awesome series right there y'all :p).

Wish this story didn't have to end *tear* but I wish for you to continue something like this soon! :D

Ronnie - who is about to go to sleep...so...sleepy...about...to close...eyes...

Aw this is the most awesome love romance cute adorable story ever! Im so loving it! Amazing! bravo!

i luv da story n i adord how da populour dude is da janitor,it made me laff,b/c dats wat most populour people deserve!

I love this chapter greatly :)

Awh.

Poor kelsie.

I like this :)

It was cute.!

O M G...this is totally nail biting, and the only other story I've read where I couldn't put it down was Twilight and only REALLY good storys make someone do that. I'm sure all of your other stories are just as good and when I'm done with this one I will for sure check them out :)

funny, unexpected, and romantic *swoon* This is proabley the best chapter I've read so far and I haven't been able to stop reading since I started it!