| Reviews for Only the Benefits |
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   AlreadyGone chapter 3 . 6/29/2008 that was really funny. it sounded like you had a good time writing it, thanks for revieing by the way ;D |
| Abigail Night chapter 3 . 6/26/2008 Oh, I Love It! I Love It! I Love It! Funny, Evil, and Disterous! It's Perfect! Keep Writing! |
| Jaden Ink chapter 3 . 6/25/2008 its okay honestly you rushed into it abit... like i don't know how lucas and kelsie know eachother, why he drives her to school or what she looks like but the story line is really fun |
| Off to Jellybean Land chapter 3 . 6/25/2008 rotfl! this chapter was pure evil! :D loved it so much! wow, how far to go for a senior bf |
| intenseapathy chapter 3 . 6/25/2008 Not bad so far.. the one thing that caught me odd was the fact that Kelsie seems like such a manipulative person, but she won't just go steal Evan from Adriana without getting anyone else involved. Then again, I guess Lucas kind of wants in because of Adriana. Oh, and I think you should find a way to show the backstory of Kelsie and Lucas, because you dove right into the action of the plot and I feel like I should know more. Nice beginning chapters though, I'll be looking for the updates. peace and love, S. |
| Jecori chapter 2 . 6/24/2008 Lol, I immediately like this. The idea's been done over and over, and yet I am attracted to this. Good work :) |
| Abigail Night chapter 1 . 6/24/2008 Love it! Love it! LOve it! Write more! |