Reviews for Only the Benefits |
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![]() ![]() ![]() Good, but there are a lot of verb tenses that seemed mixed up. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Good First chapter. Can't wait to find out what happens next |
![]() ![]() ![]() awesome! huge fan now, luv the suspense in the story. so mysterious, sweet, awesme twist |
![]() ![]() ![]() AW! It was so cute! I loved the epilogue!1 |
![]() ![]() ![]() yay! Great ending! :D I'm glad you added this it just completes the story :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() nice, i love teh cliffhanger, and the way yu write realy makes me want to check my grammar[: |
![]() ![]() ![]() amazing[: i absoultely love it. very well written, i have to commend yu. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i will finish this story as soon as i finish my hw tmrw! lufit![: |
![]() ![]() ![]() It was Lucas, wasn't it? Oh, I feel like I'm going to cry now! (Sorry, i get quite emotional with stories...) |
![]() ![]() ![]() O. M. Fuh-reaking G... |
![]() ![]() ![]() at the end of the story...its not childish at all, you have a gift for writing and don't take this lightly...i wish i could write like you, but keep up the good work...i'm gonna read all your stories! |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahahaha...and thats it |
![]() ![]() ![]() definitely don't rewrite, well, i guess its too late now, but its awesome the way it is |
![]() ![]() ![]() when Kelsie was telling Evan off, it got a little long, but thats all, still great! |
![]() ![]() ![]() wow, interesting turn of events(ok, i'm using interesting too much) but as they say, "the plot thickens", so, can't wait to read more, great job so far, and i realize i'm reading this a little late, but i hope you enjoy the reviews anyway |