Reviews for Stupid Sweet 16 |
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![]() ![]() ![]() wowza |
![]() ![]() ![]() I want to rip Tyler's head off. That's pretty much how I'm feeling right now. Stupid Tyler! I wonder who she'll end up with, Jayden or Tyler? Hmm... I kind of hope that Tyler will shape up and become a man and finally just admit the truth to Jay. *sigh* DRAMA! Update soon please :) |
![]() ![]() ![]() Tyler confuses me. and i think you should explain the whole Jessica/Tyler thing. Good story. |
![]() ![]() ![]() Yup. This story is one of the better ones on . Pro's: 1. Minimal grammar/spelling errors. 2. No over-the-top craziness that overtakes the entire romance and plot. Some craziness is okay. 3. It's good and I gotta go so I can't really elaborate. Sry. |
![]() ![]() ![]() OMGAWD you have to update now please! that was soo good and cant wait to read more. ~Cali~ |
![]() ![]() ![]() A lovely start to the story! Keep up the good work. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i think this story is really getting awesome. Please keep the chapters coming. |
![]() ![]() ![]() I like it. It's a little out of the realm of reality what with the engagement but that just makes it fun. I would work on developing the main character more because there are a million female protagonists like her on Fictionpress. But it's funny and it has a lot of potential and I added you to the C2. |
![]() ![]() ![]() this was amazing! please hurry with the next chapter. i loved this chapter so much. it was really funny too. |
![]() ![]() ![]() oh yeah, happy birthday! * i am dislikin' his cockiness, but i can't say i HATE him until i find out why tyler cheated. UPDATE SOON PLZ! |
![]() ![]() ![]() o, i am dyin' to find out the reason why tyler "cheated" on jacinda. and why he and jessica r so cloe to each other. o, i am also dyin' to read more! |
![]() ![]() ![]() NO! THEY CAN'T BE DEAD! -wipes away tears- Rest in peace, Bob and Bobbina. :( Tsk, Tyler is such an ass. I don't hate him, but he's currently really really annoying. LOL...this story makes me think of 'No Booty Calls.' It's hilarious, look it up on Youtube. (: Update soon! |
![]() ![]() ![]() i like the story line! im excited to read more |
![]() ![]() ![]() Cute story! I think that it was a little all over the place for a while in this chapter. (She was getting a car...then wasn't?) But it is a good story. Your reasoning is good and I am interested to watch Tyler and Jacinda's interactions. |
![]() ![]() Team Jayden why can't she be with jayden and CAn she effing tell the truth that he cheated on her with her sister maybe they would understand oh come on and Jayden is ass and slow HELLO she likes u Idiocity these days spreading like wild fire epidemic update asap |