Reviews for Stupid Sweet 16
Twist Their Emotions chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
Good chapter. I like this story. I don't see any typos and the plot is original. Nice chapter!
RYTEREWQ chapter 2 . 7/25/2008
Oh my God. Poor Jacinda. (:

And for a moment there, I thought Marvin liked her. Guess I was wrong, though...I mean, he took the cheerleader's number...

But, seriously. If Jacinda was real we'd so be best friends. xD

I wonder how she felt when she was referred to as a possesion. Hehe.

And btw, I looked up the name 'Jacinda', and it means Hyacinth. A kind of flower, I'm guessing... (:
MelGrl chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
i can't wait to see how this story turns out, so update soon, please!
PaintSunshine chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
This new chapter was quite interesting. Haha.

The whole plastic cup thing was something I'd do as well.

I was just wondering, is the Nile River in Africa or Egypt? Lol. Haha.

Anyway great chapter. ;)

P.S. you spelled my username wrong. you said PainSunshine. haha. That's funny. PainSunshine. Lmao. :)
Crazy colorz chapter 2 . 7/24/2008
wow fun twist but you HAVE to explain why its Jay that has to get married to Taylor and not Jessica.
PaintSunshine chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Wonderful! :)

I hope you continue this story.
RYTEREWQ chapter 1 . 6/25/2008
Haha, I love cliche arranged marriage stories. This is off to an interesting start. Definitley gonna keep an eye out for updates.

And Jacinda is suck a pretty name. What does it mean? I've never heard it before. XD
Take It All Back chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
I LOVED this! It has the potential to be a very popular story on Fictionpress, so keep the chapters coming! You did a great job with humor, but try not to fall into the cliché storyline later in the story, because you already dissed it in this chapter. It wouldn't really fit into the story if they ended up falling in love, then having a fight and then falling in love again. But I'll definitely still read this story if you do use that cliché. Heck, I use it in my stories. Haha. GREAT job and I've added you to my favorite authors and favorite stories list! WOOT WOOT!
Twist Their Emotions chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
It's cute. I think the plot is original and interesting.:)
pyrolyn-776 chapter 1 . 6/24/2008
Very nice. Very nice. Now go review mine woman! lol. She's going to get with Tyler! She's going to get with Tyler! *Ada does happy dance*

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