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Lana Sky chapter 2 . 6/30/2008
Hm...good advice. You betcha I'll follow it. Interesting...

Also, I tried using names like Edith and Lydia because it seems thats all the other names that could fit my era (like Mary, Victoria, Elizabeth, exct) were worn out and I didn't want to make up some wierd name like Susanerriah that you can't pronounce. I will deffinently consider trying out some new names in the future though. thanx for the advice!