Reviews for Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent
bittersweet freak chapter 67 . 12/22/2009
God. I've been up the whole day just to read this you know. :)) I can't help the excitement.

I love how you conspired your story and make us believe that it is what we think that's happening. You had a tight grip at our necks, you know.. *chuckle.

I can't believe that Gendou has been hiding under that mask all along. tsk.

I love the Emperor and the Empress' story. It's a shame that it wasn't real.. oh bother tales! :D

Done with the praises. Now, my criticism, well, since after the scene in China, I noticed that the beauty of the story starts to waver. I don't know, but it's what I see. And, I didn't like the ending, because the story didn't deserve one. Whatever! I can't explain my point well, but, I insist that it should've ended sadly.. It would've been better if all of them are left dead except for Ayane-chan.

I was also surprised why Gendou would suddenly shot himself, when he is indeed, powerful. Right? The revenge is successful, yet why does he shot himself, he could've called his men to do that right?

And, Yamazaki Nami-san, She's Lily, and I'm expecting that she has those body guards.. AH!

I don't know, This one is complicated, about Aya-chan:Kaori, AH! why? I don't understand! And Yoshida Akira-san's Diary, if he's helping them, why are they deceived?

One more, I LOVE Yuken-kun's character here, it's just that you didn't give justice to his character. You didn't give him the chance to explain everything. I was amazed how his brain works and find them all by himself, but, AH!


Still, you made me grin like a hyena (a lot.), made me laugh like crazy, send chills to my spine and brought tears to my eyes. Although I really don't like Chapter 55 onwards, (Well, except for Yuken's sleuthing and the shocking relvelation.) It's worth to read this..

To know you're a boy makes the amazement triple as it is. :D

Keep up the good work! Wot! Take care always and God bless, Hiro-onii-chan! :D
readaholicxxx chapter 67 . 12/18/2009
Ayah chapter 67 . 12/8/2009
Oh my gosh!

I haven't read them all yet but I'm already in the epilogue...hehehe...

“I want glow-in-the-dark stars on my ceiling…”

“But your stars have fallen eight years ago…”



Beneath your mask is a little girl longing to be loved…




Isn’t my love enough to bring your stars back?




I loved you for eight years…







…but you still choose him…

"I have my STAR back."

Oh my gosh!
deceitful.dreams chapter 55 . 11/30/2009







im pulling an all nighter to finish this :D
Icyfire4w5 chapter 66 . 11/25/2009
1) Okay, I've managed to calm down. I've always assumed that the tale is 100% true, so yeah, I'm such a fool.

2) I've been wondering who Saori is, so thanks for answering this question.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 65 . 11/25/2009
Oh gosh, I can't believe this, I really, really can't believe this... Gendou has been hiding behind a mask for ages?
Icyfire4w5 chapter 55 . 11/25/2009
1) Yay, I adore authors who do in-depth research so as to flesh their stories out.

2) Oh dear, I feel that the relationship between Ayane and Kosuke kinda mirrors the relationship between Lily and Gendou.

3) "Wo xing Yamazaki Kosuke.""My surname is Yamazaki Kosuke." (Gah, my mind is blank now, so I can't think of a better translation.)

4) Yup, you're right-you've dropped an enormous bomb onto your readers in this chapter.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 37 . 11/25/2009
1) "I was the only male child, the oldest of five children." Hmm, I guess that this family's expectations of him will be really, really high. Haha, I think that being the only male child in the family is indeed a stressful role.

2) I appreciate the Korean lullabies in this chapter, and thanks for the translations.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 24 . 11/23/2009
Oh yeah, I remember that I've read about Hachiko in my sister's textbook. See, he's so famous for his loyalty! (Oh no, I'm tearing up now, and my mum is staring at me.)
Icyfire4w5 chapter 20 . 11/23/2009
I don't know whether it's really possible to conceal stuff in pipas, but it's very, um, creative.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 17 . 11/23/2009
Hahaha... I'm amused by the girls' antics, but then again, if a guy is "cool" and/or "kawaii", won't girls idolize him? Somehow, this reminds me of some Japanese women's fascination with Bae Yong Joon. (E.g. Yonsama!)
Icyfire4w5 chapter 16 . 11/23/2009
I can kinda understand Ayane's situation. Sometimes, I'll tell myself that I must forget Incident X, but then I can't block out all the relevant memories.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 11 . 11/23/2009
1) I notice that most flashbacks will disrupt the story's flow. However, you've avoided this problem by structuring the flashbacks as "sessions". Well done!

2) I dislike playing around with clay or play-doh or whatever, yet I've to applaud Dr. Okamoto's ingenuity in this chapter.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 9 . 11/23/2009
Oh dear, I don't think I'll ever understand Yoon's obsession with kimchi.
Icyfire4w5 chapter 6 . 11/23/2009
1) I often have nightmares, but fortunately, I can forget 99% of them within minutes.

2) If I were Ayane, I would sink into depression too.

3) Ayane, have you ever thought of weaning yourself off cigarettes?
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