Reviews for Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent
plaidatheart chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I can't wait! its really good!
Nanao Nagase chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Hey there. First up, congrats on finishing the first season of Fists And Lipsticks. The ending was epic, although so many people being killed left a bad aftertaste for me. Also, I think I may go insane when you reveal Daisuke in this new season.

Secondly, the feel of Fists and Lipsticks 2: The Silver Crescent seems more mature, somewhat. Your description seems more fluid in this one. Is the writing style of F&L going to change? Well, it is set 8 years later... I wonder how things will be like in the new season. How have Hidemi, Yuken and (my ultra-favorite) Akio turned out?

Please continue to update!

heyaprilala chapter 1 . 6/27/2008

oh and just do i thought you'd know,

your story should seriously, SERIOUSLY, -SERIOUSLY
moonlit dynasty chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Indeed, the sequel at last has come.

One word to describe it: BRILLIANT

Keep it up! That was genuinely interesting...and forbiddingly dangerous. I can sense the anger and hatred, the wish for destruction.

Just one question: Will F&L 2 be written in first-person POV? or was it just used for the prologue?

JRockFan chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Finally you updated this! I wonder what she has been doing for the last 8 years in Switzerland
nejimo chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
First of all, congratulations on completing Fists and Lipsticks. It was a brilliantly written piece of work, and I'm impressed on the amount of detail you put into it. The cliffhangers, death, and twists were well thought out. The first book was very great to read, and the conclusion was fitting for the first part of the series.

Eight years is a very long time period, and I'm looking forward to seeing how everyone turned out. But I have a feeling Aya and Kosuke's relationship won't be the same. I'm just taking a guess by saying that I think Kosuke's now the leader of Spectra, and the two of them will now become enemies.

I can't wait until the next chapter. I'm dying to find out what became of everyone.
MistyRose14 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
alrighty, here we go again! seriously, i'm excited for this to commence (and on a side note, good job with picking Switzerland, land of neutrality). i'll be keeping an eye on this!
DarkAngelLida chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
woohhoo the second part is up, but why is it crime and mystery is there no romance in it? Oh well im really excited to read more thank you for updating you dont know how happy i am right now. I cant wait to see Aya in Action and i cant wait to see the new Crosse-kun ~_~ and i cant wait to see Kosuke and his friends Tomo-kun and Hidemi-kun.
FlowerNinjagurl101 chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
WOWIAM SOO HAPPY U UPDATEDthis iz amazing...cant wait wht happenz next...update soon! Very interesting starting for part 2...i can totally picture Aya!
Two Eyed Wandering Sheep Lover chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Sounds like this is going to be a good one! Keep up the good work! One question, why use "Lipsticks" instead of just lipstick?
September Sapphire chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I'm excited :)
Blazing Tempest chapter 1 . 6/26/2008

The sequel to Fists and Lipsticks (sp?) is FINALLY here. Okay, I won't complain much since it was on rather quickly.

I like...LOVE the begining. So many secrets had been revealed the last chapters of fists and lipsticks and I've got to say that I was confused at a certain time. I had to go back and re-read some chapters. It's not that I would complain about that fact since it's always a pleasure to read your work.

So, back to the topic. I really like the begining because in a way, we can nearly feel the mystery behind those words, but in another way, it's clear that this story began smoothly.

Okay, I've got to admit that guns and bullets and all that power and violence wouldn't normally be called 'smooth', but since this story is about fights, crime, blood...maybe even death(s), the begining is quite peaceful.

Anyway, to sum it up, it's awesome.

I can't wait to see spectra suffer. I'm even wondering if Kosuke took his father's place. I'm also looking forward to meet the new Crosse. He escaped last time and I wonder if he'll reappear...

Um... speaking of the new position of those members, I wonder what happened to Kosuke's gang. I mean, Yuken, the pacifist, surely woudn't agree with Kosuke being the leader of one of the biggest (if not THE biggest) gang. (Hey, we're talking about illigal stuff and possibly mafia.)

Oh, god, I can't wait to see Tomo and Hidemi soon! Let's not forget Akio. Who else (who's not dead yet)? (I mean so many people died and that's just too sad...)

Oh yeah, there were Shizuki (I'm not sure of her name... the girl who's with Yuken) and Makiko (is that how we spell it?)

Honestly, I'm not too ready to meet Dmitri Williams, Stream and Yamazaki Daisuke. Screw them, they are breaking Kosuke and Ayane's relationship...

Also, there's something that I would like to point out.

When you write full names, either you put their family name first, either you write it the english way by putting it last. Because I've noticed that you write 'Yamazaki Daisuke' and 'Dmitri Williams'.

Actually, it confused me a bit when you gave Keiko's real name which should be Lily something, but by putting Lily before her last name, I actually thought that her family name was Lily.

Anyway, it's not really a big deal, but it'll be even BETTER if you could be more carefully in further chapters.

Ah, I talk too much. hehe, sorry. Anyway, I'm still wondering why Ayane is wearing a dress...

I hope to read chapter 2 soon!

-Departure Pearl
SimplyFae chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I know this is going to be good... You can already feel the long awaited revenge strained to be released! I almost want to go ahead and add this to my favorite story list... But i'll wai tthis chp 1 _
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