Reviews for It's my heart
The ultimate neville fan chapter 100 . 2/21/2009
WOW! You got to 100! 3 digits! 100! That is amazing! It must have taken ages to write! And I love the word "essence"! It reminds me of shampoo for no particular reason!

I'm going out for a few minute now, but when I get back i'll read your other update bits and bobs! Can't wait!

Can't believe it's over actually! A whole 100!


The ultimate neville fan chapter 96 . 2/18/2009
OMG! Your on 96! Well done! That must have taken ages! Congrats zoe!

I like reading these just before I go to sleep! They're REALLY good! Seriously! I can never rhyme 2 words together in a poem! Seriously, if you look in an old english book i have about poems all the words are mumbo jumbo! :) Like

it was a nice night,

it was a nice sight...

And that is the best I couldn't come up with!

So congrats in writing 96 amazing poems!

And I can't wait until the 100th! -Well...I'll be very sad it's all over but I can't wait to read it, if you know what I mean! :)


Willis123 chapter 46 . 1/26/2009
Woodyhoo. You may reach your benchmark. Keep it up.
The ultimate neville fan chapter 57 . 1/8/2009
HOLA! (It's not spanish but...lauren-ish!)

I loved them! I also love the word muddled...don't ask! :)

I like it when you say "Smashed my heart" it sounds like it is made of glass, very fragile! Nice metaphor...if it was supposed to be one! :)

FIZZ! I love that word aswell! Don't ask about these words...i'm having a word-y moment!

oh! On my rubiks cube I got 2:17!...With a headstart of course! lol! Otherwise it's about 2:50 average!

Have a nice evening! :)

UPDATE SOON! (I mean VERY soon)

Lauren (Nev's no1 fan)

The ultimate neville fan chapter 49 . 12/15/2008

They are brilliant! And I thought the bubblegum pink one was fantastic! Great Job!

Sorry I haven't been able to review in a while! I have loads more emails to sift through!

Keep up with your amazing poems! Can't wait for more! :)


-The ultimate neville fan!
Solar Confusion chapter 3 . 11/3/2008
Are you reading my mind? This is a lot like how I'm feeling right now, and you captured it well.

Much love!
jade D chapter 1 . 11/3/2008
wow it's really good :)
The ultimate neville fan chapter 31 . 10/3/2008
I don't think this is a random one! I think it flows very well! :D

No! Its the last one you updated! YOu've GOT to update more! And more often!

Loved them al!



P.s update!
The ultimate neville fan chapter 30 . 10/3/2008
Sailor style!

Sponge bob! Woop!

Aw! This is a sweet poem...yet sad! Amazing writing!

I loved the title!


The ultimate neville fan chapter 29 . 10/3/2008
Wowowow! I love the last note! Its great! Well, I'm saying that about all your work! But seriously! I think your writing is amazing!


The ultimate neville fan chapter 28 . 10/3/2008
Aw! This is great! Seriously!

I can so tell you wrote this though! :D You put "Damn it"! Lol!


The ultimate neville fan chapter 27 . 10/3/2008
Wow! The flow of this is just amazing!

Its really sad though! But really good! lol!


*Shudders still* English teacher?


The ultimate neville fan chapter 26 . 10/3/2008
This ones a sad one! Its all about pain and cold. And I hate being cold! lol!

Really good show of emotion...I sound like an english teacher now! *Shudders*


The ultimate neville fan chapter 25 . 10/3/2008
I love the sentence "I can't resist your charms"! Thats reeally good! *Smiles*

:D :D


The ultimate neville fan chapter 24 . 10/3/2008
Hey...again! lol!

Oh! On the last chappy it wouldn't let me review! *Sobs*

But I stil loved it! I love your style of writing!


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