|Reviews for Drip|
| xGekkeiju chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
What a chilling concept! Beautiful, though. Really. I liked the first stanza about rain because it did an excellent job of exposing the morbid theme of the poem, but my favourite would have to be the stanza about the tears. "Salty remnants of yesterday's thoughts" and "How wonderfully psychopathic..." absolutely made my day. No kidding. That's poetry at its best, my dear.
And actually, I really enjoyed the ending. Yes, it was abrupt - but throughout the entire poem you were slowly narrowing down the stanzas into more and more succinct descriptions of what it was you were talking about, and I like how the end just puts it out there. Because everything just clicks into place there. Bam. Hard-hitting. I wouldn't change it, but that's just my opinion.
Usually, I like to add in a criticism or two for a poem, but I find nothing to criticize here. The imagery is fantastic and the concept is very well-developed. Great job, Holli - keep it up!
| lymli chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
makes me feel every single thing in life is important, good work.
| Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
I liked it. Nice work.
Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and wonderful summer.