|Reviews for Confessions of a Former Chew Toy|
| Elika chapter 1 . 7/15/2008
Hehe. I just wanted to pop in and tell you, that I'm a HUGE fan of your. Six Weeks with Satan was great, and this story is really showing promise. I also wanted to let you know that I think your writing style has improved considerably, from some of your earlier works, and your story plots and ideas aren't half bad either!
Well, anyway, I think I've popped in enough for now. God Bless you and keep writing!
| TheImpossibleGirl93 chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
I like this, it's really well written with nice, long, chapters. Well, please update as soon as you can.
| UnforseenSilence chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
*screams* YAY FRAT PARTY! lol, I may be just a highschooler, but I must say I cant wait for these lol. I also love the monopoly. Amory reminds me of the kid I like, but amory is single, and equally good at monopoly! Lol, I loved this chapter, and I find nothing wrong with it at al, so if you wanted constructive critcism, you wont get it from me lol!
Cant wait for next chappie!
| I Quoth Nevermore chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
As cheesy as this sounds, I smile ever time I read this story. You put my beloved House in there, and then you added in Facebook, which was wicked funny. Poke having a sexual innuendo? Too funny. I can't wait for the frat party! Lars is so funny. I don't know why, he just is. To me, at least. Persistent little bugger, eh? Haha. Well, I love this with mucho intensity, so update soon!
| MintyOly chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
I like your story but as a french reader I feel the need to be critisize a little ...
Dorianne accent could almost be real but she definitely couldn't ...
It sort of makes Evie sound intolerant.
We do have monopoly in France (I know it's amazing !) and we don't play weirdly with the squares...
Other than that it is a nice story just like 6 weeks with satan was ;D
| GrannyP chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
Well... that was awkward. I am of course referring to the scene with the neighbor. The best part about that scene was the fact that the guys had already left the room by then. Although it would have been quite hilarious if they were still there, I don't even want to think about the embarrassment it would have caused.
Well, awesome update, as usual!
| Alenor chapter 4 . 7/14/2008
heya, this is a fab chappie. but god noisy neighbours are really annoying! ah well, can't wait for more ~ ALenor.
| The Cat Died Nobly chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
Why do I love this story? Let me count the reasons.
Number one, it makes me feel smart, since I'm able to catch all of these wonderful historical (well, sort of in some cases) references. History, next to English and Art, is my best class. xD
Number two, I checked out the pictures you put up for these characters, and I totally revel in how normal they look. And that second picture you used for Tully made me go gaga. Mostly because I have an affinity for reds. But my main point was that not only do these characters LOOK normal, they feel normal. Not only do I pass them on the streets, I also feel like know them, go to school with them, etc. It's great. :D Except maybe Amory.
Number three, your vocabulary is amazing. I hadn't even heard of words like 'erstwhile' until this story. I'm really digging that you're extending my lexicon.
The Cat Died Nobly
P.S. Liking the funky names.
| Nicki BluIs chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
You know what I love about this story? You don't try to get all literary or over do it. It's just real. Seriously, I really relate to this story, simply because it feels like something that could happen among my group of friends. Anyway keep up the good work.
| Angel of Ink chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
I like it, and I look forward to updates. :D
| WriterGurl123 chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
Love the title which just made the situation even funnier. That's the one thing about college that I'm not looking forward to. lol
I'm glad that her and Tully are getting back on track and I'm very interested in this frat party that's happening the next night.
| White Rabbit Tale chapter 4 . 7/13/2008
I am currently loading an episode of House right now. Even though I've seen all of them they're still so comforting and fun to watch...
anyway, good chapter, I like seeing the social interactions of the whole group. Dorianne sounds like a typical bitch, but I'm sure there's more to her...and if not, I'm sure she'll stir up some interesting plot-points. As usual when there is mention of a party, I am expecting that chapter to be very fun to read...we get to see Lars again (I love him, he's so, as Evie put it, gregarious!) and the 'gang' will be hanging out again. There's bound to be something to further the Amory/Elizabeth plot...especially with all those comments about Amory's drunkness.
Anyway, lovely chapter, even better than chapter 3, and I can't wait for another. Congrats on the SKoW nod-I totally agree with it, by the way, the Kurt/Lotte fights were intense and awesome!
| mia5081 chapter 3 . 7/11/2008
Um, excuse the somewhat belated review-my computer pretty much went kaput. But now it's running again (somehow), and I'm waiting patiently (okay, more like anxiously) for my new lap top to come in. Katie, it has been delayed like 9820398 times. I'm going to cry (not really, but still)...onto the real review and not my rambling lol.
Totally loved this chapter. I could really see how much Tully is struggling. I'm pretty sure that he likes her, but I can already tell that this love story is going to be more about getting over the pain of the past more than anything else. And man, Tully sure created a painful past. Not going to lie-if someone went off on me like that, I would slap him too. Hard. And hope that a tooth would pop out or something. By the way, I'm not a violent person hehe.
P.S: BEST LAST LINE EVER lol
| bittersweethero chapter 3 . 7/7/2008
| BeautyIsn'tSkinDeep chapter 3 . 7/7/2008
I loved this chapter, especially the bit about their past - it was sweet! :)