Reviews for Fatality
ode to a nightingale chapter 1 . 7/27/2008
I never kill flies. Or ants. Anyway, I really like this. You captured a thought in four amazing lines. Very nice.
Isca chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
The last two lines were particularly well-written and descriptive.
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 6/26/2008
Well written piece. Nice work.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~