A very interestng chapter and story! Update soon!

So good! Will we see Adam again? I bet he's going out of his mind, what with seeing his best friend vanish in thin air and all. I can't wait to see how the story develops. Will Elijah always be so scared of Ira or will he eventually be able to joke around with the demon? Can't wait to read what happens.

This is really interesting! Poor Elijah...kidnapped by a rather terrifying demon... Oh, well, at least it's a change of pace...? And poor Adam! Wonder how he's handling the whole thing... Looking forward to more!

really good chapter here, not kidiing at all! the plot just took off and ur character development was intense as well! i really like both Elijah and Ira. Keep up the great work!

This is really good! I love how in-depth and complex you're making these characters, while at the same time keeping things somewhat simple and less confusing.

Keep up the great work, I look forward to discovering the 'mystery' as well!