Reviews for The Day I was Ditched |
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![]() ![]() ![]() hmm ideas ? marriage ? a fight between the two guys ? a fight with chanelle nd mom ? hmm .. them together nd happy again ? idk . |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww poor chanelle . fucking derek , wow listen to me ? im getting mad over a story . hahah yeahh well that one was interesting . well at least he found her , aww i feel bad . |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol its spelled enough* well that was sad he really misses her . aww so sad . hope she misses him too . |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww ! now i wanna cry . they had it goin good . /: damn bitch , poor matt . hope he looks for her . |
![]() ![]() ![]() ah ! yay , theyre sorta-ishh together . ughh her mom . damn bitch . |
![]() ![]() ![]() aww , sweet moment . yay ! theyre falling for eachother ! [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() lol i seriously love yur chapters . [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() ahahah , i love yur chapters . lol its actually quite funny . [: keep it up , theyre great . |
![]() ![]() ![]() hahahahah ! i love this one , its hilarious ! i wouldnt stop laughing at some moments . great chapter . [: |
![]() ![]() ![]() YAH! *hugs u* YAH YAH YAH! THANKS YOU FOR THE WONDERFULL STORY AND CAN"T WAIT FOR THE NEXT ONE! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Wait, is this the end? WHAT? You can't end it! Aw, man! Why is it that all the good stpries have to end! Damnit! Ah, well this was a great chappy. Only one slight flaw: Wouldn't Matty be a little weak after having surgery an' all? only I know someone who did have surgery after getting shot and he couldn't move for three days... Well, this is Fictionpress...Haha! Anyway, great story, I loved it! XEternalXDamnationX |
![]() ![]() Geez, that doesnt feel like a ending at all! Anyway, I LOVE the story (except is a bit perverted for me) i am the 50th reviewer. you MADE it. Melo |
![]() ![]() ![]() *blinks confusedly for a second at what she just read then turns and glares at author* . . . ? THATS THE END! . . . *cries* nya! but i hate to such a good story end grr . . . hm on a happier note i love your story . . . .-_- . . .-.- |
![]() ![]() ![]() I'm so glad they end up together..that was an awesome story. Keep writing! |
![]() ![]() dont let MATTY die, i dont like tragic story, i like happily ever after ending. If Matty DIE, make Chanelle Die too, so they can go to heaven or hell together. Melo |