Reviews for Beauty
this wild abyss chapter 1 . 6/18/2010
For somebody who's never written a poem like this before, you sure did a good job. I loved the rhyme; it wasn't forced or generic or stupid. It was just there and it flowed naturally. The last lines, in my opinion, didn't really seem to fit with the rest of the lines. I guess that I just wanted more description. (:

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Colin Joseph chapter 1 . 8/29/2008
Why can't it be real?
May Elizabeth chapter 1 . 8/28/2008
Short, simple, but discriptive...Nice imagery. Great job. Keep it up!:D
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 7/12/2008
aww i think it's really cute, especially the last line. and plus it rhymed. YEAH!
Starfire17 chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
Simple but good. A good first nature poem, I liked it.
Kaname-Kun chapter 1 . 6/30/2008
Short, sweet, and to the point. I liked it. The rhyming was good, and the words sort of gave a broad description of some of nature's best landscapes. Maybe a little more description though? The only problem I can predict with that is that it might mess up the rhythm. Beautiful poem, all-in-all
Needa S chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
Beautifully done! Write on and God Bless.
Savella chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
I like it! And you're getting better at rhyming. Keep it up!
totallyinspired chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
oh my gosh this is amazing! its so short but yet its so good! i love the rhyme and the flow. and the words and actual storyline type thing are really good. im not making much sense, am i! but i suggest that you drop the "This" on the last line because that line has too many syllables so it doesnt flow right. instead it could be "It can't be real/ Must be a dream". just a thought. favourites :D