| Reviews for A Fight For Dominance |
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  Kai chapter 13 . 8/12/2012 I want chapter 14 up! this is awesome! |
 A-Crimson-Memory chapter 1 . 8/11/2012 So I stumbled across your story and already I'm loving it! I hope in these 13 chapters that Damien does have chase on his hands and knees begging him to fuck him! Op I have a dirty mouth but hey, I think this story is a mixture between kinky and dirty ;) |
| xoxlizzie chapter 1 . 7/31/2010 Sweet story! The first chapter was awesome :) I can't wait to read the rest! |
| Handsome Devil chapter 13 . 7/11/2010 Awwiie. That's so cute. Damien's really cute in his own way, huh? And what's going on between him and his friend? Does she like him or something? Why would she be dating that other girl then? Also, I have a feeling Damien does care about Chase and that he's not just doing this for the sake of torturing him. He is going about it wrong, but I think he genuinely likes him. And I would LOVE it if you made Chase the dominant one in this relationship. I'm getting pissed off about all the "cooler" guys constantly being the dominant ones. I mean, at least in this story, no one is cute with watery, big eyes and a tiny short body. And Chase fights right back, so that's still pretty awesome. I just REALLY wish he is and not Damien. :) & please update soon! :D |
| imagineaworld chapter 13 . 6/25/2010 I love this story! Please update soon! |
| JustHereToSayHi chapter 13 . 1/19/2010 please please please please update cause this is really good and i want to keep on reading! |
| rahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh chapter 13 . 12/19/2009 Updatey? Please please please |
| Rainsoaked Archangel chapter 3 . 10/26/2009 Okay wait a damn minute. Are his eyes blue or are they gold? Get it straight or give a good reason for the back-and-forthing, because this is jarring, sweetie. Other than that, pretty good stuff. |
| xXx.Fallen.Angel.xXx chapter 13 . 9/23/2009 Hey, I just started reading this and its really really good. I can see you havent updated in ages... so i hope you plan on finishing this, coz it is AWESOME! I love the characters and the plot, so please continue... THANKS! |
| Iron Winged Angel chapter 5 . 8/22/2009 Fear the literature book, very nice. I have threatened people with lit books before. Love the story by the way. |
| Tsara chapter 13 . 8/22/2009 write more dammit I'm dying here! |
| ShootMeStaRs chapter 13 . 8/10/2009 More chapters to read, PLZZ! _ |
| K chapter 13 . 8/1/2009 Please keep writing! |
| S.C chapter 13 . 7/28/2009 you've got a fascinating plot, you should really have someone go back over these chapters to edit them for you- the improper phrasing and gramar sometimes really detracts from the story. They're not major issues like improper verb usage but things like saying the character's face was "down casted" instead of downcast, which is the word you were trying to use, and not using commas where they really should be add up and distract. |
| Poptart Guava King chapter 13 . 2/4/2009 teehee. makes me giggle... good thing he didn't break his nose...(wonders how the crazy stalker fan girls would react...) |