Reviews for Blank Pages
Nicki BluIs chapter 1 . 8/16/2008
You mean it's. The contraction for "it is" is "it's" not "its".

Other than that I think this was an insightful piece. I liked your use of metaphors instead of similies (for the most part) becuase I felt it gave the paper an substantive value.

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Nicki BluIs :P
brokencrystal7 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
amazing! i actually never thought of a piece of paper that way but it is true all the things u say. i tell all of my secrets to my piece of paper and i just let all of my feelings out. like a teddy bear and a little girl, the little girl always has her teddy bear to protect her from mosters or just to have someone to talk to. i think that is how i think of a notebook or a piece of paper. great job