Reviews for Inadequate
Twilight Starr chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
Your profile was very interesting. I enjoyed reading it. On to the poem, it was good. You expressed feelings well and it was relateable because many people suffer from feelings of being inadequate.

Good luck with poetry and life. Have a lovely day and a wonderful summer.

~Twilight Starr~
Random-Idiocity chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
This was wonderful, sad how some people can never be enough for the person they love. Some just expect too much. Keep it Up!
fatbird33 chapter 1 . 6/27/2008
oh awesome end. i loved how you repeted the last two lines of each part and in the end changed it to "i wasn't enough." genius.