becomes more and more powerful as reread. more and more full of hurt and subtle hope.

"Staircase of Shadows." Haunting imagery! :)

"Life and her Echoes." Wow! That's such an incredibly thought-provoking line!

This piece is just amazing! Bravo!

Truly a beautiful poem. You are an amazing poet; all of your poems have such a surreal feel to them. Kudos.

i liked "let me falter and slip and break and pretend i can become whole again." but although i did get the overall feeling from the rest of the poem... it seemed to me that you tried too hard to use creative flowing words that you lost the meaning.