Reviews for let her falter |
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![]() ![]() ![]() becomes more and more powerful as reread. more and more full of hurt and subtle hope. |
![]() ![]() ![]() "Staircase of Shadows." Haunting imagery! :) "Life and her Echoes." Wow! That's such an incredibly thought-provoking line! This piece is just amazing! Bravo! |
![]() ![]() ![]() Truly a beautiful poem. You are an amazing poet; all of your poems have such a surreal feel to them. Kudos. |
![]() ![]() ![]() i liked "let me falter and slip and break and pretend i can become whole again." but although i did get the overall feeling from the rest of the poem... it seemed to me that you tried too hard to use creative flowing words that you lost the meaning. |