Reviews for let her falter
this is britt chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
becomes more and more powerful as reread. more and more full of hurt and subtle hope.
Isca chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
"Staircase of Shadows." Haunting imagery! :)

"Life and her Echoes." Wow! That's such an incredibly thought-provoking line!

This piece is just amazing! Bravo!
Baticul chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
Truly a beautiful poem. You are an amazing poet; all of your poems have such a surreal feel to them. Kudos.
BurningEmbers chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
i liked "let me falter and slip and break and pretend i can become whole again." but although i did get the overall feeling from the rest of the poem... it seemed to me that you tried too hard to use creative flowing words that you lost the meaning.