Reviews for L'Héroïne du Théâtre
MidnightInception chapter 1 . 12/5/2010
I love this, it was really good. You really displayed the emotions well and I love the last line "And no false feet shall step upon my glided floors!". Awesome, indeed :)
smilebehappy chapter 1 . 3/19/2009
very nice. i can feel the emotion. keep writing :)
Sweet Madeline chapter 1 . 10/28/2008
Your style of writing is very intriguing. I like the way you split up the stanzas just so. I think the second stanza is my favourite, especially the line "One embodiment of past sentiment" It really is true that a picture paints a thousand words, perhaps even more. Or when you see a previous lover's face, the words flow from your eyes in tens of thousands.

MagicalThinking chapter 1 . 7/22/2008
First and foremost, the title of this is amazing... It just captures my interest with its..french lol

Secondly, your organization is key in this; your words flow precisely following something like a storyline thats etched out by the breaks in between-very nice, very neat n_n

The poem is completely relatable in the sense; its just like "thats it! I'm done with it all!"; its almost refreshing as it is heartbreaking-sort of like a moment of just clarity.

Wonderfully written piece! _ keep up the awesome writing!
fallenflame13 chapter 1 . 7/10/2008
I liked the words you chose. The last line wasmy favorite. Great work. Keep writing!
Averybarbarian chapter 1 . 6/29/2008
FRIKEN YES! Move aside and stay away from my man danget! … ~sigh~ unfortunately I have to deal with that. Erg I hate prior relationships especially sensing the fact that in my personal relationship I have with my fiancé is my first relationship. It really upsets me when he brings up his past girlfriends and how they have damaged him or what great things they did ect. Really words I cannot say… give me a moment. I am a calm person by all extents of nature “ungodly so” my friends have more than often said and I think that’s one reason Daniel loves me so much. The word upset, which is the only word I can think without swearing, is a major understatement. But I hear you. Those who walk in second are doomed to walk in the shadow of those who came before them that’s when you hit him upside the head and remind him that you are far more special and important than they are and ever will be. Anyway WONDERFULLY WRITTEN! I enjoyed reading it ) Keep writing this was really good!
BurningEmbers chapter 1 . 6/28/2008
I think that you captured it quite beautifully. I really liked the first two stanzas, but i the analogy about the stage didn't really work for me.