|Reviews for Running|
| digna's boobs chapter 1 . 8/26/2008
it was interesting. is it about you and my boobs?
| Lime-Cat chapter 1 . 8/17/2008
It bothers me that there is no end punctuation in your lines because I can't clearly see the end of a thought in a line.
I also didn't really like that your summary was a copy of your title because a summary is meant for you to give the reader a little bit of info on the content of your poem and I wasn't given any info - I felt like I was thrown into this poem without knowing what I was getting into. If you don't have anything good that comes to mind that you can say about the content or subject of your poem, then resort to a quote from your poem that you particularly like - after all, something is better than nothing.
I think it would be appropriate to categorize this poem further into Hurt/Comfort based on the content and image that I get of a girl chasing after a lover.
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| melo chapter 1 . 7/3/2008
this is my favorite... cuz ther r so many ways u can interpret this and every single one of em is DEEP